drummers lament

you hypotised my drums
as they beat a rythm
from deep in my soul
in the spirit of love
watch me exploding outside
putting me in this magical world
as my drum beats
how i feel inside
as i bathe in your love
as i beat harder
on the walls of my heart
i want the world to hear
you and me
together
till the end of time
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Mar 2013

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shadow1950
simply lovely a pleasure to read ty for sharingteddybear bouquet
darkhorse555
thank you so much shadow always a pleasure wine
trurorob
I like the way you write, very romantic
Rob
darkhorse555
thank you for the lovely comment rob appreciatedtip hat tip hat
Odette67
i want the world to hear
you and me
together
till the end of time

Raw passion unleashed. thumbs up purple heart
fjamesj9701
Good stuff, a very lovely piece.....Jessehandshake
darkhorse555
thank you odette a truly beautiful commentballoons tip hat
darkhorse555
thank you jesse always a pleasure thanks for the lovely commentthanks tip hat
wayne34
Let's hope those drums beats never go silent for are world will be a quite place without love thumbs up banana
darkhorse555
once again thank you so much wayne the drums are banging like mad they are that hot they are sending smoke signalstip hat thumbs up
rapturecapture
Hi darkhorse

An out-pouring of love the beat to your heart..
Loved it.
Hope she does as well
Thanks for sharingwave wave
darkhorse555
thank you rapturecapture for the wonderful commentdanceline
doctorwho10
your a drummer liam nice onecheers
darkhorse555
in my mind charlie ha ha thats why ive had a headache so many timeshandshake wow
weemick1960
Liam, may the drums play forever in your Soul my friend.

Mike.
Fellsman
Hi DH

You hit the 8-ball plumb into the centre of the pocket with this write - I especially like your imaginative use of musical metaphor.

Nice one, a fine write...

Bill cheers
bard76
simple wonderful, your very talented. celts rule lol...david....
darkhorse555
mike the drums do play forever lovely comment thank youthumbs up tip hat
darkhorse555
bill that was a fabolous comment thank you for your kind words thank you ever so muchthumbs up tip hat thanks
darkhorse555
david truely wonderful comment thank you ever so muchthumbs up wine cheers grin
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