My eyes still see that smile That skin,that hair,that face My ears still hear that voice That laughter..that cry
An ocean between us And history stacked against us A click put you in my arms, And a buzz alerted me of your leaving
They say I'm without a heart If only they could hear it break They judge my life in darkness If only they knew how I missed the light
Our time is chiseled on my mind I am a prisoner of the life we shared Every thought is a stab dipped in disappointment For logic says you should still be in my arms
I am become a beach without sand A sky without stars, alone in the dark of night Joy grabbed your hand as you walked out the door Leaving only my shattered dreams to share my bed
Indeed I am without a heart For there is nothing left to break...
So totally feel this one...I've been right there...excellent write bro
ldykiaranampa, Idaho USAApr 6, 2013
This is a poem we all can relate to I think. We all have lost someone we have loved and the pain of losing that person is unbearable. You think that you will never get over the pain but yet time does heal all wounds. In time you will find someone to replace the pain and fill your life with happiness. This poem reminded me of time past and how I felt when I lost someone I cared for deeply. We are left with memories that in time we can look back on and smile. Very well written and realistic. Keep up the good work.
SUMMIT09DALLAS, Texas USAApr 6, 2013
HOW WOULD ONE KNOW LIFE IF EVERYTHING IS PERFECT. LOVE IS SO HARD TO MAINTAIN WE ALL SAY IN TIME YOUR HEART WILL HEAL, BUT HOW LONG IS TIME
Wow!! I hear you...really deep write,!!! Can relate to those emotions. ... ty4sharing
MichaelKPOPBrooklyn,Pretoria East, Gauteng South AfricaApr 7, 2013
Normally you break up with someone, and the first thing you do is remind yourself of all the crap they put you through. But what happens when two people happy with each other part only because of circumstances and nothing else.
Time heals all wounds...maybe so...but often there is nothing it can do about the scars
MichaelKPOPBrooklyn,Pretoria East, Gauteng South AfricaApr 7, 2013
Thanks for all the lovely comments..very encouraging
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LOVE IS SO HARD TO MAINTAIN
WE ALL SAY IN TIME YOUR HEART WILL HEAL, BUT HOW LONG IS TIME
Time heals all wounds...maybe so...but often there is nothing it can do about the scars
For there is nothing left to break...'
Michael, talk about bringing it home..
That's perfection.
Thanks for your sharing