Parasite

by fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida, USA

Apr 2013 843 Views 22 comments

Parasite

Author: Pepé Le Pew

I love her madly, today I love her even more
I'm just so disappointed with the outcome
Her love once consumed me with fire, but now the burning is done
All that's left is the choking smoke then theres the tiredness from boring dilemma
Love gets fingered knuckle deep, but oh well is all I can say
If I peel away this blistered skin just to make it bleed
Then will you pour salt inside the infection to stimulate me
A most unpleasant way for anyone to feel
But for me at least I know its real
So draw a dotted line around this heart of mine
I no longer think I need you
Surgically severing my siamese twin is the only way to kill her memory,
my homicidal parasite

*JJF*
4/14/2013

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Posted: Apr 2013

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Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKApr 14, 2013

So draw a dotted line around this heart of mine
I no longer think I need you
Surgically severing my siamese twin is the only way to kill her memory,
my homicidal parasite

WOW! Jesse, I think this is brilliant.

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKApr 14, 2013

I just read this poem again Jesse and noticed you are not the author Still... good choice... Very much like the stuff you write.

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKApr 14, 2013

My pleasure Jesse.

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAApr 14, 2013

I read it after i wrote it and thought hmmm maybe i can be a bit too dark sometimes.

thank you again and the pleasure is mine...jesse

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoApr 14, 2013

This poem is bloody hell brilliant,to bad its not yours.

It sounds like just the way you would pen your work.

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoApr 14, 2013

Thats the greatest injustice a mother can do to her son by naming him that.

Brilliant write my friend.

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAApr 14, 2013

Thank you sir again, I learned from the best

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandApr 14, 2013

a flea in your ear i liked it

jonE2toneOrlando, Florida USAApr 14, 2013

Its already been said, brilliant

Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaApr 14, 2013

Hi Pepe,

I can so identify with this. Nicely done.

shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKApr 14, 2013

Jesse simply utterly brilliant
Her love once consumed me with fire, but now the burning is done
All that's left is the choking smoke
exceptional pen

madtat29Farmington, New Mexico USAApr 14, 2013

Here here...killer write jesse...I always liked pepe...made me laugh...

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAApr 14, 2013

Thank you DH for your Comment. Im killing the fleas , no more irritation...Jesse

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAApr 14, 2013

Thank you 2Tones im glad you enjoyed...Jesse

ha 2 tones

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAApr 14, 2013

Hows it going Macduff, thank you for reading and leaving your comment. I wish i was the one saying i can relate altho ive been here before just dont want to be here now. They say its hard to find good help i say the same about finding good love

well thank you again...Jesse

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAApr 14, 2013

Thank you Shadow for reading and leaving a comment. Always a pleasure...Jesse

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAApr 14, 2013

Hell yea MT thank you for reading bro.Good seeing you...Jesse

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAApr 14, 2013

Mcradloff always enjoy your comments. Yea they have a scary set of chompers tho dont they.

...jesse

jk2youSYDNEY, New South Wales AustraliaApr 14, 2013

"So draw a dotted line around this heart of mine
I no longer think I need you"

Good decision jesse

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAApr 14, 2013

Thank you for reading JK, I am glad you stopped by brother...Jesse

smmerwindSan Francisco, California USAApr 14, 2013

Yes indeed Jesse this isi a clever one. Just make sure when you make your decision, you stand with it because this is truly what you want to do and not be a yo yo.,

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAApr 14, 2013

Thank you Phyllis I am glad to see you West coasting on my east side

Thank you , live, learn, love, laugh over and over ....Jesse

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