drop dead georgeous

by darkhorse555Donegal, Ireland

May 2013 651 Views 26 comments

drop dead georgeous

I caressed the words in my heart
through the blood running through my veins
with the butterflies you leave
fluttering in my heart to you
radiant beauty
stars above
your soul shines
I have been in hell
surely heaven
through those beautiful eyes
the key to your soul
I all but caress your heart
drop dead georgeous
I call you
my hands on your knees
I fall at your feat
beautiful your soul
the dagger to the heart
I would die in your arms
drop dead georgeous

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Posted: May 2013

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Comments (26)

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKMay 21, 2013

WOW!! Mr romance, Mr Darcy eat your heart out.

shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKMay 21, 2013

lovely Liam flows well
through those beautiful eyes
the key to your soul
I all but caress your heart
says it all and without lights lol

shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKMay 21, 2013

tights

weemick1960Fife, Scotland UKMay 21, 2013

Liam my friend, I concede defeat. Hearts are most definitely yours. Really enjoyed the read and we'll forget anyone ever mentioned tights, RIGHT?

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMay 21, 2013

lols

Now you've certainly turned up the heat in romantic writing here,this is really good

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandMay 21, 2013

you humble me in such beauty words Odette marvelious comment

beautifulyouNew York, USAMay 21, 2013

as the guys might say... 'props' dark lol

<~~~~ guy like emoticon

this was really good darkhorse!

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 21, 2013

You have heart and passion that is for sure. Excellent piece...Jesse

cameal6someplace, Washington USAMay 22, 2013

wow ... you got a talent for romance

CailinCallaghanJennings, Florida USAMay 22, 2013

Oo! Serious ardor... I admire that very much, and it's very well conveyed. I like this quite a lot!

ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaMay 22, 2013

Swoon, now see why all the woman want bits of you

ArteeeChristchurch, Canterbury New ZealandMay 22, 2013

WOW!!.. who needs Christian Grey when we have Mr Romo! lol
Exquisite darkhorse555!!.. just so beautiful!
angel2

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandMay 22, 2013

ha ha linda I will say nice comment less of the tights are you talking about pan it aint over to the frog is buried haha thanks linda

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandMay 27, 2013

mick I wont mention those silky wear ha ha I enjoy your comments thank you so much mick

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandMay 31, 2013

poetno1 your words take my breath away beautiful comment

douggie1955Torrance, Central, Scotland UKJun 2, 2013

brilliant bro DJ

heidi3626donegal, Donegal IrelandJun 2, 2013

Awwwwww

love ya babes xxx

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandJun 3, 2013

lady beautiful you thank you for such a wonderful comment

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandJun 12, 2013

jesse your comment has just blown me away thank you so much pal