she picked a flower growing near the river and placed it in her hair, it was a beautiful red, it showed so well in her dark hair, she trailed her hand in the cool water and the spray from the waterfall felt cool on her face.
He walked out of the water as if he was part of it and smiled at the girl who sat waiting, his skin glistened and the water fell in rivers down his body making it seem like he was a part of the river.
He held out his hand and she placed hers into his, he pulled her into his arms and lifted her high swinging her around, she laughed and kissed him, then they seemed to disappear into the water falling softly over the rocks.
The tour guild walked into the clearing and turned to the people there, he had been bringing people here for years and he still felt the two souls of the lovers who drowned so long ago as if it was yesterday.
Entrancing write my Love. As I always say, we all need the magic, sometimes it is the only thing that keeps us sane. You should meet Atranto, Lord of the waters, you would really Love him. He looks after your drowned Lovers my sweet, he looks after them. I know, You have my Love, now, and always.
kidmenotusa, Washington USAJun 4, 2013
a beautyfull love story,im sure this probbly has happend some place in this world.
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAJun 4, 2013
This is a wonderful story dear. It felt like the introduction to a great romantic movie. All the mystery and intrique is right there.
ChristinDewToronto, Ontario CanadaJun 4, 2013
Mysterious and Romantic I love it. Lovely
serena123durban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaJun 4, 2013
You are really good sis, improving daily!
ArteeeChristchurch, Canterbury New ZealandJun 4, 2013
Exquisite... beautiful beautiful Romantic touching love story.. Loved it!.. Thank you for sharing ladyjewel...
ladyjewelOPDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaJun 5, 2013
thank you all so much, was a fun challange Hugs sis
john17021984campbelltown, New South Wales AustraliaJun 9, 2013
Hi Jewel, What a remarkable poem that was. it was like lovers who became ghosts returning to the time an event were the tragedy first happened, you tell these stories so beautiful and I know Shadow very well we have been friends for some time now, she is an accomplished writer also, you always impress my imagination, you are a girl of many talents, thank you. John Ginesi
CelticPoet12Prescott, Arizona USAJun 9, 2013
Thou art a Jewel Lady, indeed!~ SMILE. This is so beautiful my dear. So beautiful. I love the story, although it is sad, there is still a sweetness in knowing these lovers are together forever. 'Tis not a watery grave, but a space of timeless love. I so enjoyed the images you've created in my mind. Thank you for sharing this treasure. I look forward to more such adventures.
Celtic
ladyjewelOPDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaJun 9, 2013
thank you John and Celtic for your lovely comments:-) Every person here always makes one feel like a star, thats what I love about this Beautiful part of cs
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a great romantic movie. All the mystery and intrique is right
there.
Lovely
Thank you for sharing ladyjewel...
Hugs sis
Celtic
Every person here always makes one feel like a star, thats what I love about this
Beautiful part of cs