JUST MY VIEW

LOVE four ordinary letters yet so powerful
But before using these letters be very careful
Because after reading my view you will see anew
This word is not black, white, grey or even blue

Put Yourself into the word as "I" for a while
Replacing "O" now you have LIVE, I can see your smile
Turn that word around now you'll get EVIL
Yeah now I must protest I am no devil

Still using you in the word my dears
Juggle the letters around a bit; even in tears
Let's view the other words found
After we have done a bit of a turn-a-round

The first is VILE otherwise despicable or awful
Don't bash me! I could have said revolting or dreadful!
Remember people this is my view and only mine
It is not a deed sealed and signed

Next in the word juggle is VEIL still in the word game
And here is a list of words that means the same:
Covering, Shroud, Mask, Pall, Cloak or Blanketing
Look in your dictionaries its not lies I am marketing.

It is really interesting to note the only letter here
That can never start the word is "I" you know my dear
So here is a bit of advice to you and you and you
Keep "I" away from love at all cost its best one can do...
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Posted: Jun 2013
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MY VIEW

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morgen90210
spelled with an i
amazing poem
got me thinking
of other possibilities

my mind is muddy
so I'll try some. thing like. this later
thank you. so much
enjoyed it very very. much
Jyonnah
Kle, this is fantastic! heart wings Very enjoyable read, with a truly virtuous message. Exceptional, dear! hug wine teddybear rose
shadow1950
Kle congrats this is extremely well thought out excellent teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
kle76am
Morgen thanks for taking the time to stop by glad you enjoyed the read
kle76am
Jyonnah it is always good to know that someone else enjoy reading my thoughts thank youhandshake
kle76am
Shadow my poetry Sister I am honored and glad you enjoyed my poems thanks so much for stopping by.banana head banger
Poetnumber1
This is a clever piece Kle.My head is still turning from all that thinking.grin Well done. hug
kle76am
Poet#1 Thanks kind i am honored hug teddybear beer
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