Emilia i have disappointed you. I cant discribe the way i feel. Ive hurt you in so many ways to make up for it is unreal.
Emilia I have failed you and the guilt haunts me every day. I have distroyed the part of me and this time sorry wouldnt take it away.
Emilia I have just killed you. I couldn handle being alone. I went to hell and dragged you with and left you there on your own.
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Posted: Jun 2013
About this poem:
Emilia is the sweet and nice part of me. The trip through a bad part of my life i was so bitter that i destroyed that part of me. Hard lessons that was learned.
Great poem full of sorrow. I surely can relate to this for it seems I have most a part of myself too. Thank you for sharing.
john17021984campbelltown, New South Wales AustraliaJun 7, 2013
Hi Jasmyn, A poem and a confession of guilt to a friend, it is very good but for a few spelling mistakes, it is a good idea to proof read your material before posting it, it will give you a better end product, but the story is quite gripping, full marks to you. John
JasmynKatrynOPPinetown, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaJun 7, 2013
Thank you for the coment. English is not my first language and with spell check its a bit tricky. This poems i post was written long ago and basically the first time i revealed them to anybody.
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeJun 9, 2013
a marvelous piece the word s would describe CAPTIVATING.
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the word s would describe
CAPTIVATING.