by PipinNantwich, Cheshire, England, UK
Jul 2013 353 Views 4 comments
Beggars vs. Thieves of heart
Today I'm about to change the way I am
As I am about to embark on a new journey, as I can!
A colourful world is awaiting me out there pretty smart
Amongst the rich beggars and the poor thieves of heart
Stepping out there my mix and match
Filtering out the good beasts from the bad batch
I am sure about to take my time back then and for now
As love should never come easy when on show.
As I am about to embark on a new journey, as I can!
A colourful world is awaiting me out there pretty smart
Amongst the rich beggars and the poor thieves of heart
Stepping out there my mix and match
Filtering out the good beasts from the bad batch
I am sure about to take my time back then and for now
As love should never come easy when on show.
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Posted: Jul 2013
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Comments (4)
What is "pretty smart"?? Doesn't fit with poem.
Chiding doesnt fit either.
Batch doesnt work
The problem with the poem is you are using words just to get them to rhyme. The sentence goes from aspirational to dull in two words for no reason also. Poor in general
huge hugs sweet lady
and the gentleman above, mmmm no picture, no poems, no writing, no risk, unknown 'critic', sigh just another drawing with nothing inside, maybe one day we will see something
Merci! As always your comments are very much appreciated as they come from a genuine soul and heart.
As I could see with mr1983 he has not come far in life yet so maybe one day we let him into the world of ours.