Another 40 Year War

Damaged at 40 and still I can't connect
No wonder I cry over just the concept
The deeper the pain the deeper I forget
Until withered further by that aspect
Looking back on it.
If it wasn't for the joy
between a dog and a boy
I just might of split
but didn't
with the help from the invisible part
that just won't quit
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Posted: Jul 2013
About this poem:
There is no coming to consciousness without pain.
Carl Jung

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Comments (1)

aware3
Hey There Surprize ! Yes you are from N.O.L.A. Me too-I just wanted to say that I liked how this poem flowed- I also liked, that it left lots of room to ponder the ?- just where in the heck, is Surprize going with this ? I'll have to study on it, as my grandmere would often say. I have figured out though, that you must like to surprize others too ! All silliness n cow patties aside, I can truthfully say, " That- was not a boring read ! " Hope you know, I'm being a real silly here, it's late- I'm way tired and that's a sure-fire recipe for me gettin' sillitis. I also know, with you being from N.O.L.A., you've no doubt got some funny bones too. Well my poetry is on here and I'm sure due the firing squad ! Wait I think- I've got it now ? It must fall under the abstract category, now I really feel silly !

Silly me, C.C. innocent dunno doh help sad flower
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