rising morning

by darkhorse555Donegal, Ireland

Aug 2013 595 Views 21 comments

rising morning

Light crawling
over darkness
In morning lights up
Darkened clouds
close in

A storm brewing
Upon the distant horizon
Emotions in turmoil
How could one
Be so cruel

In nightfall
Opening the devil's cauldron
Got the answers
Love lost
in a flash

Hell with all
Its turmoil
So surreal
Slowly the clouds
They disappear

In their mist
Kissed
by the Sun
delightful rainbow
A colour bouquet
My angel

The morning light
love of you
Appears dazzling
Upon the morning dew
Crystallized beautiful
In frozen time

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Posted: Aug 2013

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Comments (21)

Serenity4twoDonegal, IrelandAug 11, 2013

Hello Liam ,
another gorgeous poem

I especially loved the last verse !
Well done you --I really enjoyed reading this --Fiona

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAAug 11, 2013

Hi Liam a wonderfully done romantic write....Ken..

weemick1960Fife, Scotland UKAug 11, 2013

Hi Liam,
I have to agree, another great write my friend. From feelings of turmoil to Love's blinding light I followed your every word.
Another great read Liam.
Catch you later.
Your friend,
MIKE.

kidmenotusa, Washington USAAug 11, 2013

liam this is another master piece. love lost in a flash.This happens more often then not in this corner of the world we call cs

shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKAug 12, 2013

you just get better and better Liam totally utterly lovely

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USAAug 12, 2013

Never a wasted read and always a great piece from you my friend...Jesse

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandAug 21, 2013

thank you so much fiona for the amazing beautiful comment deeply appreciated

wayne34liverpool, Merseyside, England UKAug 21, 2013

From darkness to turmoil all in one very stormy poem dh enjoyed this good poem

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandAug 21, 2013

thank you ever so much ken for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated

EnochianSyaireLimerick, IrelandAug 21, 2013

Hey Darkhorse nice to meet you..I'm new here nice to see a fellow Irish man here...Great poem, for me from this I got the everlasting struggle between Light and Dark. Great allegorical points from my perspective. All layered with some typical Irish weather..haha It was a pleasure to read thank you for the magick!

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandSep 14, 2013

MICH WITH THE GREATEST PLEASURE THANK YOU DEEPLY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT GREATLY APPRECIATED MY FRIEND

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandSep 14, 2013

CAMEAL THANK YOU DEEPLY FOR THE AMAZING COMMENT HEARTFELT APPRECIATED

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 14, 2013

Wonderful imagery portrayed throughout with a romantic quality about it that I liked. Well done my friend. Love and Light.

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandOct 1, 2013

linda thank you ever so much dear friend wonderful comment deeply appreciated

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandOct 29, 2013

jesse my dear friend wonderful comment deeply appreciated

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandOct 29, 2013

david thank you for the amazing beautiful comment dear friend deeply appreciated

2725dlEnnis, Clare, Clare IrelandOct 29, 2013

The morning light love of you. Appears dazzling upon the morning dew. Crystalised beautiful, in frozen time.
How magical that poem is well penned Darkhorse. Liza