Hi Liam, Keep possession of the heart at all times Liam. Seriously liked this read Liam. Don't change the way you write. You write from the heart at all times. Catch you later, Your friend, MIKE. Catch you on the flipside.
ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaAug 20, 2013
thank you so kindly amy for the amazing beautiful comment truly appreciated
123whisperMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaSep 16, 2014
We all have learned things in the dark that we could never have learned in the light, so that there is really only one logical conclusion;we need darkness as much as we need light.Beautiful sad poem
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKSep 16, 2014
Wow! You are so good, darkhorse, at writing about a 'rotten' to the core experience. Even the dark parts are a joy to read...
'turning the stones over in the graveyard of life' - what an exquisite line...
And love the ending - victorious, yes!!! SCatlyn
ImagineLoveVenus, Montana USASep 16, 2014
"in the burning remains" that is heavy! Jesse James said it best..let's burn down something or start a fire! Great dark piece Liam! You get us going good!
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Nice journey of self-discovery and freedom from the past...
Ken..
Catch you later,
Your friend,
MIKE.
Catch you on the flipside.
and this is BAD stuff (in a good way)
too many Dark elves here. . .
oops i forgot u r a horse. .
Blessings
Amy ravengypsy
'turning the stones over
in the graveyard
of life' -
what an exquisite line...
And love the ending - victorious, yes!!!
SCatlyn