Broken ice

i have been bitten
in the deepest chambers
cold black
frosted ice
cracks begin
showing

watch were you are skating
oh but i am not depressed
in fact the very opposite
raging mad
like a red rag to a bull

a bird shit on my nest
blowing the main fuse
like a flash of lightning
heartless burning
deep inside

beyond my wildest belief
to have the balls
cold as steel
i shake your hand

tainted my little paradise
drawing the past
latest conquest
a place dear to me
were i grew up

laughter and happiness echos
in the mind beautiful
i have no words
to say
cutting

in blue cold steel
on the blades edge
on thin ice
breaking up

i say forward
driving it in
the dagger opening
a deep wound
in the heart
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2013

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Comments (15)

bard76
loved it dh.....your really showing your personality here, the things you've been through, going through...... got to know you a tad more in this beautiful poem.....david.......
Spartacus2012
Hey Liam,

Poignant write my friend...From the heart and soul bro..

Ken..motorcycle
weemick1960
Hi Liam, You bare the heart more and more in each write my friend. A fine write Liam. I enjoyed this read as I have3 enjoyed all the others.
Catch you later.
Your friend,
MIKE.
ladyjewelonline today!
hug beautiful way you write Liam, can feel all your feelingsteddybear
darkhorse555
david thank you for the amazing beautiful comment deeply appreciated my friendangel grin
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ken thank you for the beautiful comment deeply appreciatedangel grin
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mick thank you for the wonderful comment heartfelt appreciatedangel grin
fjamesj9701
Cool stuff my friend your becoming a legend beer
darkhorse555
ladyjewel thank you for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciatedangel
niah9
Broken Ice....what an image.....and a great write with meaningful words.....loved it....Kathy....teddybear hug
darkhorse555
jesse dear friend wonderful comment heartfelt beautiful deeply appreciated angel kiss
darkhorse555
such an amazing beautiful comment kathy i thank you deeply greatly appreciatedangel wine
shadow1950
Liam hey mate this is fantastic such a range of emotions love it hug wine kiss dancing
darkhorse555
linda dear friend thank you kindly for the delightful beautiful comment appreciated deeplyangel wine
darkhorse555
so true phyllis thank god that i am now blessed with the grace and beauty of angela wonderful comment dear friend appreciated deeplyangel wine
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