Majestic stones stood in a ring while birds flew by on the wing this once was a place of kings who spent their time battling
Their foes were now for beheading this fate was cruel but befitting a warning for others come warring with every intention of acquiring
War horses swift of feet cantering plunging with battle lust capering the knights so proud are gathering the stone ring they are honouring
Through the ages cults made offering changing as they grew up in culturing yet never the stones change appearing mystical, powerful capable of conjuring
socrates44San Fernando, Trinidad and TobagoOct 9, 2013
Hi Shadow
Your poem has excellent rhyme and rhythm. It reminds me of the poems I met in primary school that were memorised and recited. I found myself going along with the sing-song rhythm as I read it. Well-done! (I assume it refers to Stonehenge. Please correct me if I am wrong) Have a nice day!
Serenity4twoDonegal, IrelandOct 9, 2013
poetry , so well constructed with wonderful rhyme Linda ! well done you ! warm regards -F
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKOct 9, 2013
Ty Cameal for nice review glad you like it
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKOct 9, 2013
Ty Jesse always appreciate your feedback
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKOct 9, 2013
Ty Anthony atmosphere is important lol pleased you enjoyed it
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKOct 9, 2013
hi Socrates it applies to any and all stone ring/circles glad you liked the flow and rhyme of it
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKOct 9, 2013
Ty Fiona for your kind review so happy you like it
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Thanks for sharing ...regards Anthony
Your poem has excellent rhyme and rhythm. It reminds me of the poems I met in primary school that were memorised and recited.
I found myself going along with the sing-song rhythm as I read it. Well-done!
(I assume it refers to Stonehenge. Please correct me if I am wrong)
Have a nice day!
well done you ! warm regards -F