Mustered with much consideration to determine, The paradigm that I’m trapped within. A paradox that lacks ideas of genuine human nature. Root question: “Who is to blame for this failure?” Time has revealed the blackness of those souls within my niches. Ravenously they feast these parasitic leeches Maybe I am the anomaly in this obscure reality. I’ve bare witness to countless self-destructing patterns like a star on the verge of demise. I’m stranded here, my experiments to escape are futile of which I despise. Surgeons of immorality with wretched scalpels they dissect my humility Bending me to see if I can break, measuring my elasticity. My volatility hidden by a cloak, seen a mirage of one so docile. Venom sits behind these fangs, this viper ever so vile How long can I hold high the flag of my temperance? Will I ever the tailor a fabric of my deliverance? I tread against the current of an estranged tide, denying convergence. When will I attain divergence?
I find I enjoy your poetry very much , I can often identify and empathize. You capture the emotions well.Regards...Jesse
IvoryPetalsOPArima, Borough of Arima Trinidad and TobagoOct 27, 2013
thanks jesse! i heard the word divergence in a fly leaf song and i thought i would come up with a poem for the word! But its kind funny that these type of emotions that came when i wrote this poem.
I hope to grow in my writing. i know i write alot about lost love, hurt and depressing a** stuff. But want to have my readers to be filled with emotion and say they can relate or at least gain something for my poetry.
This is my # 79 poem i hope to get better with every write!
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I hope to grow in my writing. i know i write alot about lost love, hurt and depressing a** stuff. But want to have my readers to be filled with emotion and say they can relate or at least gain something for my poetry.
This is my # 79 poem i hope to get better with every write!