Raincheck

by Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi, USA

Nov 2013 732 Views 22 comments

Raincheck

Author: Spartacus2012

My phone sounds
a text
"how about a rain check?"
she sends...

"Sure, of course."
I respond...

Rain is falling down
on the sidewalk
I won't go inside...

Clouds hover above me
tonight I am alone...

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Nov 2013

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Stuff happens!

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darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandNov 20, 2013

maybe for a reason dear friend hope all works out god bless

RedexNorthumberland, England UKNov 20, 2013

What can one say

some poets are here tonight so you are not so alone.
I liked the picture that went with your poem.

sundayrose1san francisco, California USANov 20, 2013

So sad yet so profound my friend. Great twist in the end

SR

Serenity4twoDonegal, IrelandNov 20, 2013

Hi Ken ,
Upside --"Rain check " is better than a complete cancellation

Tomorrow is another day :-))
You will never be alone dear man ,,you are part of us in our wonderful Poet's family

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USANov 20, 2013

Hi liam,
Most certainly my good friend..Thank you for visiting..

Ken

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USANov 20, 2013

Hi Redex,
Thank you..It is good to be among friends..

Regards,

Ken

beautifulyouNew York, USANov 20, 2013

Ken

such a powerful write, in so few words!

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandNov 20, 2013

Hi Ken

Raincheck
as you say stuff happens...
Hopefully the sun shines for the next meeting arranged angel2

Lovely poem.
Thank you for sharing

Martina xxx

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USANov 20, 2013

Hi Sundayrose,
Thank you for a lovely visit!

Ken

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USANov 20, 2013

Hi Fiona,
Thank you for the lovely comment..It is indeed an honor to be here among you guys!

Regards,

Ken

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USANov 20, 2013

Hi B.Y.,
Thanks for the lovely comment and visit..

Regards,

Ken

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USANov 20, 2013

Hey Ken , nothing like a soggy rain check . Enjoyed the read my friend ...jesse

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USANov 20, 2013

Hi Martina,
Thank you for visiting my humble verse today!

Regards,

Ken

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USANov 20, 2013

Hey Jesse,
Thanks bro for stopping by..

Ken

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainNov 21, 2013

Sure does Ken, well depicted
Rob

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoNov 21, 2013

Hi Ken, enjoyed reading your poem this morning. May the sun shine on your tomorrow pal.

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USANov 21, 2013

Hi Rob,
Thanks for reading this one..

Regards,

Ken

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USANov 21, 2013

Hey Poet buddy,
Thanks for dropping by for this one..I hope all is well my friend.

Regards,

Ken

diana_1San fernando, San Fernando Trinidad and TobagoNov 21, 2013

hm... I love this style and it is beautiful and deep in it's simplicity but just remember some rain checks should not be cashed

a wish for you my friend that it turns out nicely in the end.

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USANov 21, 2013

Hi Diana,
Thanks for the lovely visit!

Ken

soulgoddessTokyo, Kanto JapanNov 23, 2013

An exquisite write!

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USANov 23, 2013

Hi Soulgoddess,

Thank you for the wonderful comment!

Ken

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