by IvoryPetalsArima, Borough of Arima, Trinidad and Tobago
Nov 2013 617 Views 5 comments
"Rain" 14 word challenge
When the Earth’s sunburns aches.
God answers with "rain".
Heaven’s tears washes away pain.
God answers with "rain".
Heaven’s tears washes away pain.
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Posted: Nov 2013
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Comments (5)
SR
Very Ingenious! I love your personification of the Earth aching with sunburn and Heaven's tears as rain washing away the pain.
Beautiful Analogy!
Have a wonderful day!