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by IvoryPetalsArima, Borough of Arima, Trinidad and Tobago

Nov 2013 504 Views 8 comments

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Move against the current of the flow.
Press forward, even if your movement is slow.
Soon enough their resistance will melt like snow.
Because your strength will grow.
Rise from the bottomless low.
Be the light that always glow.
Take their every blow.
Never give up and your determination let them know.
Let your defiance show.

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Posted: Nov 2013

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Fiznh13theodore, Alabama USANov 24, 2013

This spoke to my soul! Thank you for sharing it.

IvoryPetalsOPArima, Borough of Arima Trinidad and TobagoNov 25, 2013

glad, it spoke to you, i was hoping it that it had an effect like that! thanks for reading

mimzy333unknown, Washington USANov 25, 2013

this was an amazing joy to read this morning.

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USANov 25, 2013

Good stuff Ivory, an admirable write and enjoyed…Jesse

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandNov 25, 2013

Hi IvoryPetals

I like this alot...I can relate to the strength you create in this wonderful poem.

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxx

sundayrose1san francisco, California USANov 25, 2013

This is a very committed self conviction of being strong IP.

Yes we just have to hide our weakness once in a while and be there exuberant with our strenght. I have done that many a times and boy was it a good feeling? At least to me yes if only to empoower ourselves..

Thanks for the read

SR