Oblivion

by Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi, USA

Dec 2013 555 Views 10 comments

Oblivion

Author: Spartacus2012

The truth is
so great
I don't even wish
to talk

or sleep
listen
or even love...

Today I feel
trapped
with no fear of reprisal,

outside time and magic
all I wish for
is to feel

the beating of your heart
through this madness
I wish this of you...

Today I am lost
in the oblivion of your memory
it has been five days since we've loved..

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Dec 2013

About this poem:

Evening shadows....

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Comments (10)

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandDec 6, 2013

dear friend i pray the shadows lift making way for love hope alls well ken

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USADec 6, 2013

Thank you Liam..

Ken

weemick1960Fife, Scotland UKDec 6, 2013

Hi Ken, I'm with Liam on this one bud. I hope the darkness shall pass and you shall be walking in the light again. No one likes to see there friends down. To everything there is another side. This is the other side of Love. We can't have us all going into depression. You have a good Saturday kay? Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

beautifulyouNew York, USADec 6, 2013

deep peace, Ken

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USADec 6, 2013

Hi Mike,
All is well just got a little lonesome for my girl who has been away for a few days...Thanks..

Ken

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USADec 7, 2013

Hi B.Y.,
Thank you for visiting.

Ken

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoDec 8, 2013

Hey buddy, hope all is well.

Send me a message

sundayrose1san francisco, California USADec 8, 2013

My dear Ken, what a feeling loves give us isn't it? Ah I love the part where you don't even want to do anything, just be in the calmness of your thought remembering...Such a very poignant write my friend...

Take care as always

SR