Oh it is you love i feel a charm draped around keys as this heart beats out singing the soul one chord beautifully with song travels within a spellbound magical wish delighted bliss floats passionately warm on air gently whispering every breath exhaled diamond sparkling jeweled dust settles in a shrine openly nirvana reaches the highest peaks in extasty red hot lips passionately kissing bewitching hypnotizing feelings embraces sweet emotion with delight, trembling within euphoria begin glowing stunning warm loving endearing feelings a siren touches intimately one ravishing dream when the dust settles this soul opens a golden wonder of enchanting beauty encircles draping around the deepest chambers asthe purest tender soft love begins welding emotions together two become one forever more silken weaving the silver thread becomes a precious ore like Cleopatra i want to be your Mark Anthony loving for ever eternally through ancient era of history living within this dynasty of early ascending dreams crowning ,the birth of one princess happy ever after neverending beautiful legendry draped around the neck my dream love its you rising from the shadows of the sun flowering golden enchantress stunning
Lovely poem Liam. Long may those feelings last ! Mick.
rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandJan 13, 2014
Hi Liam
Stunning romantic loving thoughts in this amazing, Wonder of love
Thank you for sharing
Lots of love
Martina xxx
Angel04gympie, Queensland AustraliaJan 13, 2014
Wow honey that is magnificent, Your words are stunning, the romance came off them words like a white mist engulfing my every breath.
Angel04gympie, Queensland AustraliaJan 13, 2014
Ok that's great English,,,, came off them not came off them words
mimzy333unknown, Washington USAJan 13, 2014
a great tribute to your beautyful angle
goldenglossMalahide North County Dublin, Dublin IrelandJan 13, 2014
You capture the first blush of love, the ecstacy, the utter transcending of fear and the giving of the heart..... If I were a pessimist, I would say 'this too shall pass' but the beautiful thing is, it doesnt, when 2 people work on it.... its lovely thank you for a gorgeous poem.
steve1223adelaide, South Australia AustraliaJan 13, 2014
The words and the visual effect is stunning
shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKJan 14, 2014
stunning Liam both the words and the visual impact good on you mate
sundayrose1san francisco, California USAJan 14, 2014
Simply stunning dear friend of mine. Surely my beautiful lovely friend of mine is awesomely standing mighty on the threshold of your whole being.
Love you both always
Phyllis
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJan 14, 2014
The shape of your poem is great Liam. It compliments your beautiful words my friend. Loved it.
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Regards,
Ken
Stunning romantic loving thoughts in this amazing, Wonder of love
Thank you for sharing
Lots of love
Martina xxx
Love you both always
Phyllis
I truly envy you for having a love that inspires such beauty...Wow!
Robert
visually ,this captures one's attention immediately ..
Your wording of the poem is excellent ..
This is a real beauty ! F