coo coo

by darkhorse555Donegal, Ireland

Mar 2014 348 Views 8 comments

coo coo

inside near vision
trying to see
the inside
of you

like a dove
cooing out whispers
whispering so
very sweet softly
i am inside
totally in love

within and out
embracing you
my beautiful baby
i feel
a warm softness
fluttering hot wings
butterfly kissing
your soul

i sold it
to you darling
whom i will always
love and look after
its your sweetheart
i forever will
golden beauty

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Mar 2014

About this poem:

smiling thoughts

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soulgoddessTokyo, Kanto JapanMar 21, 2014

Dearest Liam,

Beautiful smiling thoughts ;) Excellent craftsmanship

Warm Wishes
Angeline

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandMar 21, 2014

Good to see you smiling Liam !
Nice poem........Mick.

RedexNorthumberland, England UKMar 21, 2014

Yes indeed the picture of two doves makes me warm thinking things are not so bad with such tenderness on display.
Lovely poem.

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandMar 22, 2014

thank you ever so much angeline wonderful comment deeply appreciated

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandMar 24, 2014

thank you ever so much mick wonderful comment deeply appreciated

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandMar 24, 2014

thank you ever so kindly redex amazing beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear friend

weemick1960Fife, Scotland UKMar 24, 2014

Hi Liam, flying along as usual my friend. You always hold the vision and in this case fill It with beauty and Love. Liam, my friend, always walk In your own light for It shall always sustain you through all things. Another excellent piece my friend. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandApr 24, 2014

mike love has always been light even in darkness my savior takes me out of hell i love the light wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated dear sorry the late comment heads up and down these days trying to stay positive my policy thank you kindly dear friend deeply appreciated

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