Malady

Its being lonely that hurts the most
The emptiness and loss of hope
Its sad this place I've come to dwell
I understand that I'm in hell
The bitterness envelops me
This tale of woe a tragedy
Lost amid the symphony
The darkest notes of melody
In the depths of my depravity
Afflicted with this... Malady
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Posted: Mar 2014
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Sad and dark

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trurorob
Yes it is, but a good sad one, I like sad, hope that doesnt make me a saddo!.
Rob
Girlygirl196349
Sad but so true. I feel you. I'm hoping it's like they say time heals all wounds chin up my friend hug comfort angel
Odette67
Its being lonely that hurts the most,
The emptiness and loss of hope,
Its sad this place at come to dwell,
I understand that I'm in hell,
The bitterness envelops me,
This tale of woe a tragedy,
Lost amid the symphony,
The darkest notes of melody,
In the depths of my depravity,
Afflicted with this... malady



Dear Mad,

The greatest poets who ever lived were sad - sad can be good - sad inspires - sad is real. Nice write as always. hug purple heart
darkhorse555
deep heartfelt touching i fully relate dear friend god blessangel cheers
Joseph1112
Awesome read, thx for sharing.
Poetnumber1
Very good champ. Sad is good, often times sad is what brings out the best poems. Hope you are well.cheers
rapturecapture
Hi madtat

Love the titlebouquet
hug very deep..and dark,with a twist! malord..

Martina xxxhug angel wave
beautifulyou
sweet, sweet (((mad)))
you always tell it like it is for you and that's gift to us,

ty hon kiss
madtat29
Thanks Rob...drinking
madtat29
Ty Girly...chin is upwine
madtat29
Ty Odette...sadness is very real...one thing everone knows something about ....drinking wine
madtat29
Heya DH...thanks for stopping by brocheers
madtat29
Yw joseph..thanks for reading and commentingbeer
madtat29
M.M....what's happening bro...I'm good hope you are toocheers
madtat29
Thank you Martina...ty muchly...bouquet
madtat29
Awww...Ty beautifulbouquet
Sinclair_RHR
thumbs up blues
Nice Write
Robert
sigh
Spartacus2012
Heartfelt and incisive bro..

Regards,

Kentyping
paloma66
Touches the soul MT,so well written,from the heart of loneliness pours forth heartfelt notes.thumbs up purple heart
Redex
A sad melody but I liked its flow, doh the poems that is.hug
madtat29
TY Robert...drinking
madtat29
Write on Ken...Thanks bro...cheers
madtat29
Hiya Paloma...fancy the comment...Thanks for stopping bywine
madtat29
Well Ty Red..glad you liked itwine
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