you leave a man for someone else you ripped his heart out he falls to hell he screams he screams in agony but you've become so blind that you can't see he feels he feels the waters rise from the weight of tears that fills his eyes
drowning demons pull him down he takes one breath and then no sound his lungs fill up with haunting sadness from a soul thats hurt in all your madness forgive forgive me-he screams away as the jaws of darkness consume the prey
as he lies alone on the ocean floor once filled with life but not no more drowning demons have left him now it makes no sense like love somehow an empty heart but the swellings down to end a life in a heart that pounds
drowning drowning everywhere cause in this life no one cares take his hand this drowning man it's only then will you understand don't let go just hold him tight and watch the bubbles rise to light
break this spell if you really care and show your love hold back no fear the ocean's dark and oh so cold will you take me back would you be so bold please save me save me I want to live I've got much to share and love to give
you sound just like a tidalwave will you rescue me-is it me you'll save I felt a hand reach down to me I thought it was the raging sea you pulled me across the grains of sand you cared enough to save a drowning man
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Posted: Apr 2014
About this poem:
inspired by a song-by the cure.music has a big impact on mood and drives what i write,like many have said,its a different language all its own,MUSIC is very important in my life.
First of all Silent, welcome to our beautiful corner. My first time to read you and what an epic of grand pains of astronomical ground.
Which will lead to the second part. Like you screamed in my behalf. Surely this is a very remarkable pleadings on how love gone so bad and let emptiness reign. Just splendidly and so winning my lonely heart..
Thanks silent and again welcome..
silent_pawsOPLempster, New Hampshire USAApr 12, 2014
thanks f-james,this write came to me in waves, really!...id wake up with a few thoughts,then the next day,some more thoughts,writing can be fun.
silent_pawsOPLempster, New Hampshire USAApr 12, 2014
thanks girlygirl, my random mind keeps me writing these weird poems,but i thank you for your positive feedback
silent_pawsOPLempster, New Hampshire USAApr 12, 2014
awww!thanks lj...you said lonely heart? i know this well,i've had one for years,part of this we bring on ourselves,for me i've got a hard time letting go the past,so the way i deal with it-is writing-thanks again for being a fan..things can only get better.
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Which will lead to the second part. Like you screamed in my behalf. Surely this is a very remarkable pleadings on how love gone so bad and let emptiness reign. Just splendidly and so winning my lonely heart..
Thanks silent and again welcome..
Rob