I feel the message of hopelessness. Sometimes we try and it works out and sometimes it doesn't. The important thing is at least you tried. Great poem ty for sharing.
heart touching deeply penned i can relate excellently penned piece god bless
beautifulyouNew York, USAApr 26, 2014
'when time just seems to take it all'
hi silent-paws no doubt, nothing's permanent in this world
thank you for sharing your poem with us
silent_pawsOPLempster, New Hampshire USAApr 26, 2014
...show them your heart is what a teacher once told me,i never knew what she meant,until i started to put thoughts into words,thanks candykid.
silent_pawsOPLempster, New Hampshire USAApr 26, 2014
just another write that i never finished darkhorse,why is everything written like song lyrics i was told,my reply..cause music touches me beyond anything else,even love.
silent_pawsOPLempster, New Hampshire USAApr 26, 2014
i beg to differ beautifulyou,there is one thing that will always be the same..us humans,we're quick to judge,love to hate and destroy and slow to accept a heart that really loves them.thanks for your comment.
Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAApr 26, 2014
Beautiful poem!!
silent_pawsOPLempster, New Hampshire USAApr 26, 2014
thanks girlygirl,you're beautiful too.
Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAApr 26, 2014
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hi silent-paws
no doubt, nothing's permanent in this world
thank you for sharing your poem with us