you can try

you can try and try but nothing works
to be so kind but still you hurt
this creature you hide down in the dirt
its so unfair this kind of hurt

theres one thing in this life you learn
the pendulum swings-then you get burned
hoping-hoping for things to change
this lifes a book so turn the page

I try but it makes no sense at all
when time just seems to take it all
moving hands will tick life away
but in the end it doesn't really matter

searching but theres no one around
to wish for things to keep us sound
waiting and waiting for a friendly face
I feel so lost and out of place

you can hurt til the end of time
the words you say can't change your rhyme
you did your best to fit right in
but in the end it doesn't really matter
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Posted: Apr 2014
About this poem:
in darkness i find light,inspired by my own personal life.

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candykid
I feel the message of hopelessness. Sometimes we try and it works out and sometimes it doesn't. The important thing is at least you tried. Great poem ty for sharing.
darkhorse555
heart touching deeply penned i can relate excellently penned piece god blessangel
beautifulyou
'when time just seems to take it all'

hi silent-paws
no doubt, nothing's permanent in this world

thank you for sharing your poem with us rose
silent_paws
...show them your heart is what a teacher once told me,i never knew what she meant,until i started to put thoughts into words,thanks candykid.thumbs up beer
silent_paws
just another write that i never finished darkhorse,why is everything written like song lyrics i was told,my reply..cause music touches me beyond anything else,even love.beer
silent_paws
i beg to differ beautifulyou,there is one thing that will always be the same..us humans,we're quick to judge,love to hate and destroy and slow to accept a heart that really loves them.thanks for your comment.teddybear gift
Girlygirl196349
Beautiful poem!!hug cheering angel
silent_paws
thanks girlygirl,you're beautiful too.teddybear purple heart
Girlygirl196349
What a lovely comment!, thank you teddybear hug angel wave
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