Patient Patience

I will lie right here whilst you tickle my toes,
Prod me with instruments and shove things up my nose,
Wash me all over with cleanser, water and soap,
For me to object there is not a chance or a hope.

You can even have a go at turning me over and around,
Or changing my clothes in my own empty silent surround,
Putting up drips and bags, checking that all is well,
No matter what you do, for the moment I will not tell.

I know you understand that I am very much aware,
I can feel the warmth radiating from every smile or glare,
Everything you give and everything you do or say,
I shall always remember from now until the end of my day.

So when I recover and am walking through a crowd,
And feel or am touched without any sound,
It's the memories you all instilled in your own personal style,
So I am letting you know that whatever you do, it is all worthwhile.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2014
About this poem:
This was written when I was in intensive care very ill a few years ago and when I awoke after a number of weeks I observed the care and duty that all the ITU nurses gave to each patient. I also remember hearing things they said when I was unconcious. This inspired me to write this poem. I hope you enjoy it.

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Girlygirl196349
I'm so happy that you survived! Y OU write beautiful heartfelt poetry. I can very easily relate to this poem I'm a care giver to the elderly and I try really hard at making sure each of my clients keeps there dignity for when we get older it seems we revert back to children I don't follow that I believe love and patience should always be given to the sick the poor the hungry the young and the old my dear friend teddybear teddybear balloons balloons
Turbotim1961
Thanks Laura, I did survive........just about.........the worst part was having to say goodbye to my kids because they had put a do not resus order on me. But hey ho ..I am still here 6 years on. Life is in prospective for me now. I dont do anger, bitterness and am not judgemental. Your care home residents neeed that special care no matter how ill they are, it does makethe difference. I can remember the nurses talking to me when I was i a coma as they bathed me. I remember feeling embarrassed by it all. It was so strange when I recovered.
Turbotim1961
Bless you Laura, I appreciate what you say. Love to you too..xxxxxheart beating heart beating heart beating heart beating
Joseph1112
Hey bro this was an great write and tribute to those who saw to it that u would be well again! J applause handshake
Turbotim1961
Thanks J, It was written for that reason and presented to the ward at the time.
fjamesj9701
Nicely expressed and well written . Glad your better, but slightly off topic more I love the nurses, regards.…Jessehandshake

"APC The Nurse Who Loved Me"
I'm taking her home with me
... all dressed in white
She's got everything I need
...pharmacy keys
She's falling hard for me
...I can see it in her eyes
But she acts just like a nurse
… with all the other guys
Turbotim1961
Thanks Beaut and PJ, I appreciate yur views. I hope you find happiness in life. Tim
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