Homestead re-visited.

How great thy vista to my eyes abound,
when late of time, I viewed mt Southland down,
fond childhood memories bid mt heart re-call,
times, when all the trees seemed so tall,
but now, the burning coals of fading day
ignite twilight moments where magic colours play,
and yon not forgotten village lies
harmoniously beneath its genial skies,
its people's thatch and heavens spire,
are gently washed with sunset's living fire,
whilst graveyards' cherished ancient Yew
reach down to kiss the coloured painted dew,
and evening primrose within its shade
with contrasting hues here displayed;
and all that sleep in hedgerows wild
live freely, like as the spirit of a child
whose innocence breathes the air of play
of rapturous joy like this ebbing edge of day,
to await morning's green-mantled care,
as day dissolves in all its wondrous flare,
such artistry each captured rainbow bring
the blushing tints of sweet remembering,
as woolen clouds, their floating charms interlace
the chasing sun, warmth of time, everlasting grace,
So, when the breath of life's no more,
my spirit shall stay by the waters of the Stor.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2014
About this poem:
I no doubt like many others, left my very small and humble Hamlet at a very early, now unheard of age, to seek opportunities not available in our Homestead, so this poem captures a nostalgic return in later years.

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Odette67
So, when the breath of life's no more,
my spirit shall stay by the waters of the Stor.


Dear Phil,
Thank you for this beautiful poem of a by-gone age. hug purple heart
darkhorse555
deep beautifully painted piece phil loved how you drew this dear friendangel
rapturecapture
Hi reguiny

This is beautiful..you brought back some magical memories of my own in this homely write...

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxxhug teddybear angel wave
reguiny2006
Martina, How very rewarding that poetry from afar weaves the common thread of nostalgia, my grateful thanks, Phil. teddybear
reguiny2006
Hello good poet from Donegal, as usual you're very supportive and coming from your rich poetic pen, a compliment indeed, thanks, Phil.cheers
reguiny2006
My Dear Colette, You always get to the heart of the matter(a Scorpio trait!!), you are of course right about a bygone age,I have the happy scars of time, for when I at last grow up, I want to be a little boy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Take care, Phil.purple heart teddybear
candykid
I could read this style all day. It is so opposite of mine, which makes it that much more appealing. If only the youngest generation could be exposed to this, I might have hope for them.thumbs up
reguiny2006
Candykydd, Thank you for your generous comment, yes your style is different to that of mine, which only serves to highlight the generation gap and each generation has its own format for expression, I often wish that I could write with the freedom and clarity as you and your generation do so well, alas, I'm stuck in a time warp, regards, Phil.
beautifulyou
Phil, another natural beauty from you
i really like your expressions, sentiments
and the last 2 lines are great!
ty bouquet
Joseph1112
Fantastic write Phil, your words paint awesome pictures, outstanding. J handshake applause
lindsyjonesonline today!
A great account of past reliving in our vivid imagination Phil.

It us so beautiful to remember them specially when the place is a sabctuary of great rememberings.

Just lovely and thanks for the read.
orientalkoru
Much respected your style Phil... Always impressive... I wish to learn to put words together this way but I know I don't have it... That's what makes good poets good...thanks for sharing... Everlasting grace...in deed!
reguiny2006
Ty, Thank you so very much for the warmth of your comment, Phil.teddybear
reguiny2006
Joseph, Thank you for reading and your kind comment, Phil.cheers
reguiny2006
Hello Dear Lindsyjones, How very kind of you to take the trouble to read and then post a constructive comment, much appreciated, Phil.teddybear
lindsyjonesonline today!
I apologize for the typos Phil. I was so touched by the beauty of the scenic place which was once your endearing place.

I can deeply relate to this because now that I am retired and is revisiting the actual places I have spent most of my youth specially in College, and, what a nostalgic moment it brushes your mind...

A very great recollection that would connect us to the submission of our borrowed time.

when the breath of life's no more,
my spirit shall stay by the waters of the Stor.


Thanks again, Phil..

Please keep them coming for our delightful read..
fjamesj9701
at a very early, now unheard of age, Too funny young man but a very endearing and descriptive write from literature history it seems. I surely do admire your mechanics P. Well doneā€¦Jesse Jameshandshake
reguiny2006
Jess, Many thanks for your positive comment, Phil.cheers
lindsyjonesonline today!
Thank you so much Phil, I will definitely take you on that. It would be a great pleasure to meet you. Same here, if you happen to come to the US, please let me know..

Phyllis
reguiny2006
O.K. Phyliss, lets see how web of life spins out, Phil.
trurorob
Exquisite read Phil, a lovely journey
Rob
reguiny2006
Hello Rob, nice to hear from you, and thanks for the comment, cheers, Phil.
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