The First Date

she couldn't wait to meet him
thirty more minutes to go.
the snow is coming down now
the traffic doesn't flow.

she thinks, how will I greet him?
a handshake, a hug or a kiss?
she likes his morals and values
and her sense of humor is just like his.

she gets to the place of the meeting
no, his car is not there.
He also drove over an hour
just to meet up with her.

This must be him now
parking right next to her,
he rolls down the window,
her too.

they talk back and forth for a bit
then he gets out of the car.
she'll gets out as well, a little timid
they walk to the coffee bar.

once they started talking
they discovered,
there is no lack of things to say,
they are comfortable with each other.

a romantic Italian restaurant,
is their choice to have a bite.
no other guests around,
everything feels just right.

they drive back to her car together,
she doesn't want him to leave,
they really seem to hit it off
its almost too good to believe.

the time has come to say goodbye,
he asks: could I get a hug?
she complies, still somewhat shy
he gives her a little kiss.

they both drive off in different directions,
she smiles as she thinks of him,
she hopes he too felt the connection
and wants to see her again.
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Posted: Jan 2010
About this poem:
thinking of the perfect first date

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Comments (15)

Bentlee
Thats cool luvu, sounds like a nice time for both. From a mans perspective askin for a hug, I'm sure he enjoyed it too. cheers :)
EarthAngelinLove
Reminds me of when I first met a certain gentsmitten

We had a wonderful first date and the Goodbyeing lasted for hourskiss

No romance, but "plenty of heat"devil

A lady just doesn't on the first date, you knowprofessor


EarthAngelangel
luvuluvme2
Thank you, Bentlee. I hope you are right. I appreciate the "male" point of view.
hug yay angel happy place
luvuluvme2
thank you Earthangel, I certainly do know.lol.hug blushing angel
QuietStormF
Nice poem.. and the first meeting is always so exciting.. hug hope it all works out as you hope.. teddybear
luvuluvme2
Thank you,QuietStorm. He sure makes my Butterflys flatter. lol
heart wings flirty angel
QuietStormF
And that's always a big plus.. hug teddybear bouquet
boyshchrm6
Typical man luvuluvme2. He asks for
a hug and grabs a kiss. The Cad! thumbs up applause rolling on the floor laughing
angel cheers
jazzy75
luvuluvme - i enjoyed this poem...all the excitement and uncertainty. Good luck :)teddybear
luvuluvme2
thank you, boyshchrm, another "male" point of view.confused hug daydream angel
luvuluvme2
thank you, Jazzy, the first stage is a feeling like no other, excitement, hope and a constant silly grin. lol.grin hug angel
Pinkpoetress
luvuluvme,
I luv this poem. What a nice story. I'm excited for you. Great work. Take care.
anngi
cheering I enjoyed. Keep it up !
trurorob
You sound very happy, hope it all goes well for you.
rob
luvuluvme2
Pink, Anngi and Rob, thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. Yes, it is super exciting, taking it one day at the time though, probably the smart thing to do. but the brain is not doing the thinking these days.lol.blushing heart wings hug angel
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