love lost

love can be sad
why love at all
it can be so confusing
it can make you fall
deep in to an abyss

then there you are
how will you get out
feelings are intruding
cry out loud

you claw your way up
out the slippery slope
you try to forget
who will throw you a rope

there is nobody there
the heart is so hurt
the brain on lockdown
don't say a word

make your peace
with the love that's gone
there will be another
but never like the one

count your losses
pick yourself up
mend the heart that's broken
get out of this rut

it will be all better
in no time you'll see
don't fall in love again
tears will set you free
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Posted: Dec 2010
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It's hard to pick yourself up after love is lost, but such is life. nobody ever said life was all roses, right?

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jeddah12
make your peace
with the love that's gone
there will be another
but never like the one

love this part dear,,beautiful poem indeed,,aaahhh,,,love,,its always because of love,,,very nice.




warm greeting of the yultide season deary..

angel jacquiecheers bouquet
niah9
oh luvuluvme2...how wise we think we are as we age...regarding love...we try to do 'what is right, use head not heart,' but does it work...trouble is, our age as so called wisdom doesn't make the blow any easier to handle...or the pain and feeling of loss...it never gets easier...but do we get stronger...they say in London, you wait for a bus, then they all come along together...hope that happens in your love life, and you have numerous choices...ah, but will you pick wisely....
frustrated teddybear niah
Flesh750
Very nice poem. I enjoy reading more of yours!teddybear
trurorob
heartfelt poem
Rob
jazzy75
luvuluvme2 - your poem touched me with its emotional impact. Well done :)hug
walkerman
luvme2... luv without value is no luv at all..look deep inward...you will see nothing is lost but something is gained..there will be no regrets...i can guarantee this..except compassion..thumbs up peace cheers
caroljoyce
Well said, thanks for sharing,
cj
gnj4u
Hi, luvuluvme2,
you claw your way up takes courage and will afford a great vantage point for life and love. Thanks for sharing the climb!
boyshchrm6
Better mixed memories then no memories
luvuluvme2. Nice writecomfort hug
luvuluvme2
hi jeddah, thank you for commenting. yes, it's always love...but is it worth the pain? angel dunno snowed in
luvuluvme2
thank you niah, for commenting. i don't think I will love again anytime soon, why subject myself to more pain? angel sad santa waving
luvuluvme2
Thank you, Rob. always appreciate your comment. angel hug cold
luvuluvme2
Thank you, jazzy. you know my poems always come from the heart, i'm thinking of putting it on lockdown for a while tho. angel hug christmas cool
luvuluvme2
Thank you, walkerman. right now looking inward i see nothing but a black hole...perhaps in time...angel wine snowman2
paloma66
Dear I've said that many times after the pain I went through and it took me years to trust and love again.May you be comforted in the thought that you have the strength still.Thanks for sharing.comfort hug peace
luvuluvme2
Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, caroljoyce. angel hug reindeer
luvuluvme2
gnj4u, thank you for your comment. it will be a lonely, painful climb. angel stuck christmas sad
luvuluvme2
thank you, boyshchrm. sometimes i think no memories will be better. angel beer christmas cool
luvuluvme2
Paloma, thank you for your kind words. you know there are times when it seems there is no future at all...god bless you angel hug snowed in
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