Lines for Greta.
Last night the howling wind its torment bore,
upon the rugged Oak its anger tore,
and how the mighty thunder did shout aloud
its wrath to the heavy laden cloud,
whose burning light would not cease,
to remind the guilty there'll be no peace,
for the turmoil of the spume flung seas
had silenced the gentle southern breeze;
thus, from the dreary winter's rain,
the dreaded news o'er the ether came;
so the wise with futile brain
will life's understanding, its mystique claim,
for all their eloquent articulated words
just makes the parting more absurd,
that in ignorance, mock her loving flame,
for loves lies deeper than just a name,
So, the sweetness of the pure white rose
will the Surrey air a fragrance blow,
thy precious dust will perchance abound
a richer flora to the barren ground,
and transmute the sombre winter scene,
to paint forever the greyness evergreen,
and every songbird echoing Spring
shall rejoice in love that you did bring.
Though thy earthly candle no longer burn,
the spirit to me shall oft return,
in poignant memories recalled to dream,
that tread the paths where you have been.
So, stripped bare of all my conscious pride,
when like a child, I wept, I cried,
and cried and cried so many tears,
enough to fill the oceans' million years,
for all the years that were too soon,
this earth to lose a flowered bloom;
for long I've questioned and asked why
your haste to torch the vespers sky.
Alas! Life's course, powerless to re-arrange,
once destiny deems it will not change,
So, heart consoled- that, that was your eye,
now the fairest jewel in God's sky.
But oft in gloom and in desperation stare
at the emptiness, the lonely fireside chair,
and wish and wish again that I could hear
the cheerful pleasant 'Hello Dear',
but most of all with aching heart shall miss
the softness of that parental kiss.
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Posted: May 2014
About this poem:
An Epitaph, what more does one need to say.
Comments (22)
and cried and cried so many tears,
enough to fill the oceans' million years,
A write that truly evokes from the deepest of our soul a sadness of a past that once was our life.
Phil a very endearing message that reminds us of who we were ages ago if only to remember how much we do long and ache for a life gone by.
The last lines are testament of that moments that just stay with us forever..
Thanks for the share..
once destiny deems it will not change,
So, heart consoled- that, that was your eye,
now the fairest jewel in God's sky."
For the lines I've highlighted:
Life has a way of drawing it's on course
and when love ones go...I'm glad we have
memories that'll forever linger in mind
at times with a hint of sadness but always
warms our hearts:
"But oft in gloom and in desperation stare
at the emptiness, the lonely fireside chair,
and wish and wish again that I could hear
the cheerful pleasant 'Hello Dear',
but most of all with aching heart shall miss
the softness of that parental kiss."
Thanks for sharing these poignant Lines for Greta. whose precious dust will perchance abound a richer flora to the barren ground. ...most of all with aching heart shall miss the softness of that parental kiss, always holding a tender spot, the fairest jewel in God's sky continues to shine as memories bring their comfort.
Thank you so much for reading and appreciating the emotional content, Phil.
Nicely done my friend....Jesse
Rob
the softness of that parental kiss.
A deeeply poignant write dear Phil. How I miss my mother's hug when there is thunder and lightening - till this day it scares the life out of me.
the love in your heart shines so brightly
ty for always sharing that with us
Phil.
Thank you so much for reading and your constructive comment. Phil.
Written in a style
all of your own !
Loved it.........Mick.
What a beautiful poem...Truly
Thank you for sharing
Martina xxx