Lines for Greta.

Last night the howling wind its torment bore,
upon the rugged Oak its anger tore,
and how the mighty thunder did shout aloud
its wrath to the heavy laden cloud,
whose burning light would not cease,
to remind the guilty there'll be no peace,
for the turmoil of the spume flung seas
had silenced the gentle southern breeze;
thus, from the dreary winter's rain,
the dreaded news o'er the ether came;
so the wise with futile brain
will life's understanding, its mystique claim,
for all their eloquent articulated words
just makes the parting more absurd,
that in ignorance, mock her loving flame,
for loves lies deeper than just a name,
So, the sweetness of the pure white rose
will the Surrey air a fragrance blow,
thy precious dust will perchance abound
a richer flora to the barren ground,
and transmute the sombre winter scene,
to paint forever the greyness evergreen,
and every songbird echoing Spring
shall rejoice in love that you did bring.
Though thy earthly candle no longer burn,
the spirit to me shall oft return,
in poignant memories recalled to dream,
that tread the paths where you have been.
So, stripped bare of all my conscious pride,
when like a child, I wept, I cried,
and cried and cried so many tears,
enough to fill the oceans' million years,
for all the years that were too soon,
this earth to lose a flowered bloom;
for long I've questioned and asked why
your haste to torch the vespers sky.
Alas! Life's course, powerless to re-arrange,
once destiny deems it will not change,
So, heart consoled- that, that was your eye,
now the fairest jewel in God's sky.
But oft in gloom and in desperation stare
at the emptiness, the lonely fireside chair,
and wish and wish again that I could hear
the cheerful pleasant 'Hello Dear',
but most of all with aching heart shall miss
the softness of that parental kiss.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2014
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An Epitaph, what more does one need to say.

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lindsyjonesonline today!
when like a child, I wept, I cried,
and cried and cried so many tears,
enough to fill the oceans' million years,


A write that truly evokes from the deepest of our soul a sadness of a past that once was our life.

Phil a very endearing message that reminds us of who we were ages ago if only to remember how much we do long and ache for a life gone by.

The last lines are testament of that moments that just stay with us forever..

Thanks for the share..
darkhorse555
loved how you painted this piece phil dear beautifully penned as alwaysangel angel cheers
orientalkoru
"Alas! Life's course, powerless to re-arrange,
once destiny deems it will not change,
So, heart consoled- that, that was your eye,
now the fairest jewel in God's sky."
orientalkoru
My apologies Phil...hit the wrong button instead of preview button...

For the lines I've highlighted:
Life has a way of drawing it's on course
and when love ones go...I'm glad we have
memories that'll forever linger in mind
at times with a hint of sadness but always
warms our hearts:
"But oft in gloom and in desperation stare
at the emptiness, the lonely fireside chair,
and wish and wish again that I could hear
the cheerful pleasant 'Hello Dear',
but most of all with aching heart shall miss
the softness of that parental kiss."
thumbs up wine
reguiny2006
Hello Phyliss, thanks for your continued support, Phil.
reguiny2006
Hello Liam, your comments are always appreciated, my thanks as usual, Phil.cheers
gnj4u
Hi, requiny2006,
Thanks for sharing these poignant Lines for Greta. whose precious dust will perchance abound a richer flora to the barren ground. ...most of all with aching heart shall miss the softness of that parental kiss, always holding a tender spot, the fairest jewel in God's sky continues to shine as memories bring their comfort.
reguiny2006
qnj4u,
Thank you so much for reading and appreciating the emotional content, Phil. teddybear
fjamesj9701
Nothing, you've said it and very well my Good Man. Am I even worthy to comment O Great Sensei.
Nicely done my friend....Jessehandshake
trurorob
Brilliant Phil, such an eloquent write.
Rob
reguiny2006
Jesse, My grateful thanks for your comment, Phil.cheers
reguiny2006
Rob, I truely thank you for you response, Phil.cheers
Odette67
but most of all with aching heart shall miss
the softness of that parental kiss.


A deeeply poignant write dear Phil. How I miss my mother's hug when there is thunder and lightening - till this day it scares the life out of me. angel teddybear
beautifulyou
Phil,
the love in your heart shines so brightly
ty for always sharing that with us rose
reguiny2006
Hello Odette, Thank you, how nice that it provoked warm memories of your dear Mum, Mums' have a divinity that we are all too often unaware of, yet true to their colours, bequeath immortal memories.
Phil.teddybear
reguiny2006
Ty, It was my privilege to share with you for which I sincerely thank you. Phil.teddybear
candykid
Outstanding write Phil.....the rhymes are exceptionally good in this one as well.....thumbs up
reguiny2006
Hello Candykydd,
Thank you so much for reading and your constructive comment. Phil.cheers
Mizzy4
Special lines Phil,
Written in a style
all of your own !
Loved it.........Mick.

wave
rapturecapture
Hi reguiny

What a beautiful poem...Truly bouquet

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxxteddybear hug heart wings angel wave
reguiny2006
Hello Mick, Thank you and the more so coming from your powerful poetic pen, Phil.cheers
reguiny2006
Hello Martina, I am truly grateful for your kind comment, Phil.teddybear
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