blue wave rising

by darkhorse555Donegal, Ireland

Jun 2014 801 Views 31 comments

blue wave rising

now i like your
sweet sensual charm
with beautiful
waving lashes
floating on
a crest

fluttering seductive style
in that silent hush
blowing wind
fluttering air
upon your breath

musically whispering
out of one breeze
sweetly singing out
a songbird
charming beauty
entering the mind

swept away feelings
in this deep ocean
swells around
you darling
look after
the key

as this heart
begins opening
up doors to you
take a seat smiling
golden gleaming
sun shine

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Jun 2014

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Comments (31)

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAJun 5, 2014

A Stellar romantic write Liam.

Ken

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandJun 6, 2014

ken dear friend thank you for the a\mazing beautiful comment deeply appreciated

soulgoddessTokyo, Kanto JapanJun 6, 2014

waving lashes
floating on
a crest

Lashes that long may be fake ones... be careful ;)

123whisperMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaJun 6, 2014

Dearest friend; long lashes could be fake as comment above me said

but never the less it sounds great and what a beautiful poem from warm beating heart

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandJun 6, 2014

smiling angeline you take a thousand meaning from this loved your comment thank you so kindly heartfelt appreciated

diana_1San fernando, San Fernando Trinidad and TobagoJun 6, 2014

a write of adoration, places the key in the hands of the one who is adored, romance woven in your words Liam.... excellent

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAJun 7, 2014

Such a lovely poem as always Liam I really enjoyed this

orientalkoruGlenella, Queensland AustraliaJun 7, 2014

our prince of romantic poetry strike again...awesome piece Liam my dear friend...

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USAJun 7, 2014

Another piece to stand for my friend, always admire your passion.. Cheers and much love my friend…Jesse

candykidAshburn, Virginia USAJun 7, 2014

Liam....just like a poem machine......

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJun 8, 2014

Lovely write my friend. Be careful of the ones who use horse hair on their head and eye lashes.

soulgoddessTokyo, Kanto JapanJun 9, 2014

That's a funny comment from Mustapha! smiling at the positive energy showering here...

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandJun 10, 2014

whisper thank you for the very beautiful comment a lot of lashes waving ha ha on this one deeply appreciated dear friend

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandJun 10, 2014

You phrased this
Beautifully , Liam.
Regards Mick.

bard76Risca, Gwent, Wales UKJun 10, 2014

I remember you!!! u still have your gift............my friend...

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandJun 13, 2014

diana thank you for the amazing beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear friend

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandJun 13, 2014

laura thank you so kindly for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandJun 15, 2014

orient thank you dear friends for the amazing beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandJun 16, 2014

ah jesse wonderful comment thank you so kindly heartfelt beautiful deeply appreciated dear friend

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandJun 17, 2014

thank you so much christian smiling wonderful comment deeply appreciated

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandJun 21, 2014

laughing out loud mm sounds like you could get hit by a tail ha ha excellent comment dear friend deeply appreciated

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandJun 21, 2014

angeline mm thinks i was talking about my little pony

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandAug 18, 2014

thank you ever so kindly mick truly beautiful comment appreciated deeply dear friend

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandAug 18, 2014

bard thank you for the amazing beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated dear friend

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandAug 18, 2014

chrissie thank you deeply dear friend for the truly beautiful comment deeply appreciated god bless

weemick1960Fife, Scotland UKAug 18, 2014

Hi Liam, Your pen Is running gold as ever my friend. A song sung out In gentle splendour. Words seductively flowing Into the mind of the reader. You still have that old magic my friend, never lose It. May your pen ever run gold.
Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 19, 2014

Those horse hair also come in an array of colours. Tug on her hair to see if its the real thing before you marry her. You might get punch in the face so walk with some ice to ease the swelling.

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandSep 16, 2014

mike dear pal truly wonderful comment smiling heartfelt beautiful deeply appreciated bless you dear friend