MYSTIC MOUNTAIN

I awake to a songbird
Singing good morning melodies
The sun with his warmth
Floods my room
Playful strands of gold dance
My soul desires a peek outside
To see the vexing stir
My eyes behold
A soft fog floating betwixt
The lull lil valleys
Cool dew on barefeet
Old mountain so stern is his presence
Mystic yet comforting
He looks down upon me
Safely he keeps me
From raging storms and heavy snows
The clean morning air
And morning glories opening
To greet this mystic sight
Babbling brook flowing peacefully
With sweet hymns
What a mystical gift
That mother earth shared
With me
A writing spider sits upon her web
Spelling hidden tales
In the clearing, a sweet fawn
Playing as a child...
Tis a mystical world
Hid inside the mountain
For he stands guardian
Day and night..
For my eyes behold
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Posted: Aug 2014

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Fellsman
Hi RavenGypsy

You are an accomplished member of this poetry forum - you write with the soul of a poet, and this is no exception.

Best wishes

Bill wine
RAVENGYPSY42
My dear Fellsman thank you is a small appreciation compared to your comment... you've blessed my heart and lifted my soul... wine
Mizzy4
I love the rawness with which
you penned this......
Just you and your
admiration for nature.
Enjoyed !

Regards Mick.

peace
darkhorse555
outstanding beautifully painted piece of writing excellent pen dear friend loved how you drew thisangel grin
socrates44online today!
All hail the Magical Mystical Mountain, standing guard over the beauty of the rest of Mother Nature's creation!!!
Gypsy, this is my kind of poem. Thank you so much for posting it. Have a nice day!
RAVENGYPSY42
I'M HAPPY YOU ENJOYED IT AND RELATED UNTO YOU, EVEN SPEAKING...
BLESSINGS ALWAYS TO YOU JBwine
trurorob
Really enjoyed the picture you painted here.
Rob
RAVENGYPSY42
Thank you Rob, from my back door opens onto a display of playful nature. It is beautiful with few words to express mother nature and grandfather mountain, it is a sight to behold.
Blessing my friend
Amy- RAVENGYPSY
Poetnumber1
The title itself I thought was an eye catcher which in effect drew me in to peruse what you have written here Raven. Very beautiful imagery painted. I also loved the reference to inanimate things which was evident in a few of verses...''the sun with his and the old mountain so stern is his presence....etc. Enjoyed reading this.
RAVENGYPSY42
Thank you poetnumber1, it is a beautiful setting, I see it every morning and wanted to share...
Blessing to you my friend
Amy- RAVENGYPSY
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