I awake to a songbird Singing good morning melodies The sun with his warmth Floods my room Playful strands of gold dance My soul desires a peek outside To see the vexing stir My eyes behold A soft fog floating betwixt The lull lil valleys Cool dew on barefeet Old mountain so stern is his presence Mystic yet comforting He looks down upon me Safely he keeps me From raging storms and heavy snows The clean morning air And morning glories opening To greet this mystic sight Babbling brook flowing peacefully With sweet hymns What a mystical gift That mother earth shared With me A writing spider sits upon her web Spelling hidden tales In the clearing, a sweet fawn Playing as a child... Tis a mystical world Hid inside the mountain For he stands guardian Day and night.. For my eyes behold
socrates44San Fernando, Trinidad and TobagoSep 1, 2014
All hail the Magical Mystical Mountain, standing guard over the beauty of the rest of Mother Nature's creation!!! Gypsy, this is my kind of poem. Thank you so much for posting it. Have a nice day!
RAVENGYPSY42OPUSA, Tennessee USASep 3, 2014
I'M HAPPY YOU ENJOYED IT AND RELATED UNTO YOU, EVEN SPEAKING... BLESSINGS ALWAYS TO YOU JB
Thank you Rob, from my back door opens onto a display of playful nature. It is beautiful with few words to express mother nature and grandfather mountain, it is a sight to behold. Blessing my friend Amy- RAVENGYPSY
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 3, 2014
The title itself I thought was an eye catcher which in effect drew me in to peruse what you have written here Raven. Very beautiful imagery painted. I also loved the reference to inanimate things which was evident in a few of verses...''the sun with his and the old mountain so stern is his presence....etc. Enjoyed reading this.
RAVENGYPSY42OPUSA, Tennessee USASep 3, 2014
Thank you poetnumber1, it is a beautiful setting, I see it every morning and wanted to share... Blessing to you my friend Amy- RAVENGYPSY
Comments (10)
You are an accomplished member of this poetry forum - you write with the soul of a poet, and this is no exception.
Best wishes
Bill
you penned this......
Just you and your
admiration for nature.
Enjoyed !
Regards Mick.
Gypsy, this is my kind of poem. Thank you so much for posting it. Have a nice day!
BLESSINGS ALWAYS TO YOU JB
Rob
Blessing my friend
Amy- RAVENGYPSY
Blessing to you my friend
Amy- RAVENGYPSY