Paloma ending; The curtain comes down For the night. Raven beginnig;
FOR HER HEART RACED AS RAGING RIVERS AND ZEALOUS LOVE THE DANCE OF ANCESTORS WILD AND UNTAMED WITH A FIRE LIT INSIDE, SHE TURNS WITH A WANDERING SPIRIT FULL OF SPRITE INTO HER CAMP SHE DANCES TINY FEET COVERED WITH GOLD THAT JINGLE WITH EVERY MOVE HER HEARTH IS WARM ALL AGLOW LIGHT ILLUMINATES FROM HER BELOVED AROUND SHE DANCES HER SKIRT MAGICKAL SWAY WITH A LAUGHTER OF SWEET MELODIES HER HAIR BLACK AS A RAVEN WILDLY FLOWING FROM THE SOFT BREEZE EYES DEEP WITH MYSTERY SKIN RAVISHED FROM THE SUN AND SOUL BORN TO BE FREE A SENSUOUS CREATURE TO BEHOLD HER DELICATE HANDS PAINTED WITH HENNA THAT TRAILS AS IVY SENSUAL FULL LIPS AS IF PAINTED AND A FACE OF EXOTIC BEAUTY SHE PLAYS AMONG THE FAIRIES AND KISSES THE SUN FOR HER FORTUNE DOETH AWAIT IN TOWNS UNKNOWN FOR HER SECRETS ARE IN THE CARDS AND PATRONS DO PAY FOR THIS TINY DANCER CAN SEE TALES OF OLD BUT IN THE BASK OF MOONLIGHT HER BEAUTY UNFOLDS ONLY CREATURES OF NIGHT SEE A MAGICKAL SIGHT....
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Posted: Aug 2014
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PALOMA CHALLENGE.. MY DEAREST FRIEND I TRULY ENJOYED THIS CHALLENGE AND I HOPE YOU FIND IT TO BE SWEETLY CRAFTED, FOR YOURS WAS BEAUTIFUL.. BLESSINGS
My dear RavenGypsy I am overwhelmed at your response and exquisitely crafted poem as an ending to mine how wonderfully you haven woven it.Thank you from the core of my heart dear girl.I love it.
RAVENGYPSY42OPUSA, Tennessee USAAug 26, 2014
I COULDN'T HELP IT PALOMA... JUST WANTED TO FINISH IT.. WAS A BEAUTIFUL POEM YOU WROTE... I ENJOYED.. I WROTE ONE MYSELF TOO.. I ENJOYED THIS SOOO...
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandAug 26, 2014
My better half too had written one with beautiful pictures in response to mine and he reposted seeing that I had resurrected my poem I wanted you to write one on this and I must say you have not disappointed me.Thank you again
Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAAug 26, 2014
Just beautiful!! The two of you did an awesome job!! ::wine:
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to Paloma's poem Raven....
Regards Mick.
Bellissima! Delightful poetry and story telling - I have added you to my 'must read' list of CS poets. This is a gem.
Best wishes
Bill