The Belly Dancer (Challenge) with PALOMA

Paloma ending;
The curtain comes down
For the night.
Raven beginnig;

FOR HER HEART RACED AS RAGING RIVERS
AND ZEALOUS LOVE
THE DANCE OF ANCESTORS
WILD AND UNTAMED
WITH A FIRE LIT INSIDE, SHE TURNS
WITH A WANDERING SPIRIT
FULL OF SPRITE
INTO HER CAMP SHE DANCES
TINY FEET COVERED WITH GOLD
THAT JINGLE WITH EVERY MOVE
HER HEARTH IS WARM ALL AGLOW
LIGHT ILLUMINATES FROM HER BELOVED
AROUND SHE DANCES
HER SKIRT MAGICKAL SWAY
WITH A LAUGHTER OF SWEET MELODIES
HER HAIR BLACK AS A RAVEN
WILDLY FLOWING FROM THE SOFT BREEZE
EYES DEEP WITH MYSTERY
SKIN RAVISHED FROM THE SUN
AND SOUL BORN TO BE FREE
A SENSUOUS CREATURE TO BEHOLD
HER DELICATE HANDS PAINTED WITH HENNA
THAT TRAILS AS IVY
SENSUAL FULL LIPS AS IF PAINTED
AND A FACE OF EXOTIC BEAUTY
SHE PLAYS AMONG THE FAIRIES
AND KISSES THE SUN
FOR HER FORTUNE DOETH AWAIT
IN TOWNS UNKNOWN
FOR HER SECRETS ARE IN THE CARDS
AND PATRONS DO PAY
FOR THIS TINY DANCER
CAN SEE
TALES OF OLD
BUT IN THE BASK OF MOONLIGHT
HER BEAUTY UNFOLDS
ONLY CREATURES OF NIGHT
SEE A MAGICKAL SIGHT....
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2014
About this poem:
PALOMA CHALLENGE.. MY DEAREST FRIEND I TRULY ENJOYED THIS CHALLENGE AND I HOPE YOU FIND IT TO BE SWEETLY CRAFTED, FOR YOURS WAS BEAUTIFUL.. BLESSINGS

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paloma66
My dear RavenGypsy I am overwhelmed at your response and exquisitely crafted poem as an ending to mine how wonderfully you haven woven it.Thank you from the core of my heart dear girl.I love it.cheering thumbs up hug
RAVENGYPSY42
I COULDN'T HELP IT PALOMA... JUST WANTED TO FINISH IT.. WAS A BEAUTIFUL POEM YOU WROTE... I ENJOYED.. I WROTE ONE MYSELF TOO.. I ENJOYED THIS SOOO...wine
paloma66
My better half too had written one with beautiful pictures in response to mine and he reposted seeing that I had resurrected my poem I wanted you to write one on this and I must say you have not disappointed me.Thank you again angel
Girlygirl196349
Just beautiful!! The two of you did an awesome job!! teddybear daisy daisy ::wine:
Mizzy4
Magical, mystical addition
to Paloma's poem Raven....
Regards Mick.

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Fellsman
Hi RavenGypsy:

Bellissima! Delightful poetry and story telling - I have added you to my 'must read' list of CS poets. This is a gem.

Best wishes

Bill wine wine
darkhorse555
beautifully crafted dear friend excellent piece love how you painted this angel thumbs up
RAVENGYPSY42
MANY THANKS EVERYONE.... IT WAS A BEAUTIFUL POEM TWINED AS ONE... I ENJOYED VERY MUCH...wineheartbeating:
lilygold76
Thought to repost this beauty ...a challenge to The Belly Dancer,wondering if anyone can rise to this.thumbs up
lilygold76
Where are you dear,your poetry was so good,do you still write.Its sad many of the old poets left this site,some faithful few are still here.crying
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