Sweet thoughts surrender

Morning sweetest of dawning thoughts
kissing sunshine with love deeply within
now warmly they never really do know
what they have in front of them

It all lies in happiness
or for what they have really lost
for that matter
as one face turns cold
without love inside
meaningless heartache

Will they ever be happy and learn
or are they just happy making others sad
this is the reality of love
it's unconditional working at something
to achieve great goals together
not a second hand emotion

To just throw away feelings
discarding them at will
now sometimes it is very hard to take
in the cold truth ,
they do not love you at all
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Sep 2014

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Mizzy4
Liam as a poet friend I respect
you greatly and I genuinely feel
the emotion from your poetry.....
The harsh truth is hard to take.......
but in moving on with a forgiving
heart......I honestly think its the
best way forward.

This is a heart wrenching write !

Best wishes Mick.

comfort tip hat broken heart
darkhorse555
really its the only way mick with love forever pure forgiving is everything wonderful comment pal heartfelt beautiful go bless you angel thumbs up
SCatlyn
Wow, beautiful... and so right -

'it's unconditional working at something to achieve great goals together...'

Great poetry rose

SCatlyn
darkhorse555
catyln thank you deeply truly dazzling comment dear friendangel wow
ImagineLove
Liam I love this thought that happens so callously and flippantly: crying

To just throw away feelings
discarding them at will


So sad but true! Great write! comfort hug purple heart
darkhorse555
imagine thank you so much for the wonderful comment so true but maybe sometimes there is a reason but one never really finds out or knows the truth in the end because love is so pure angel grin
123whisper
Dear friend;beautiful heart felt poem.With your nature of uncoditional love that can be flet true your every breath,it is so easy to love you as person bouquet
Don't count what you have lost just see what you have now, because past never comes back but sometimes future can give you back better reason why you have to let go of past love so that new found happines can take place.Never give up hug teddybear
darkhorse555
oh i know sometimes love forever remains most powerful could move mountains into space its around me breathing every day my family happiness is a state of purity of beauty excellent comment you nearly got me opening up lol smiling thank you kindly wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciatedangel wine
Girlygirl196349
Liam beautiful heartfelt poem ! comfort teddybear teddybear wine wave
darkhorse555
thank you kindly laura truly beautiful comment dear friend deeply appreciatedangel grin
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