by ImagineLoveVenus, Montana, USA
Sep 2014 681 Views 12 comments
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Comments (12)
I do wish there was something I could do...
Beautiful poem - you can write anything, you're so talented!
Love you, Jadeite!
simply stated and poignant
hoping healing comes to you, ever so gently
Ken
Snow, here's my take at this juncture "either pee or get off the pot" Games, so trite!
Here's part of something I commented- on another poem here, just the other day:
'when something has gone really well and you're feeling great... seems to be the time sunset comes extra quick...bringing you down...'
and, yes, I remember like you said on 'Euphoria' - it might not last...
hoping this, too, will pass, Jade, and this will turn to this once more (or at least a happy medium)
Cat
short and precise words from the heart.
It fits most of us. You are not alone:
I just replaced 1 word "woman"
and used "man"
Thank you for such beautiful voice.
J