Apple once bitten desire

Always sweet to the mind
one bite looking through these eyes
shades the blossoms scenting
touching inside deepest cords

Softest emotions grin
begin petal smiling warm
gently in my weakness
is you love hot burning warm

Beats drip honey golden
deep brushing silent fingers
sweetly touching inside
pulse dance, flickering hotly

Unquenchable fire
through the one keyhole looking
on petal coloring
every shade,amber sweeping

To gold on glass misting
gem of life you will always
remain a mystery
sweet beautiful dream
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Oct 2014
About this poem:
6/7 syllable count

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Spartacus2012
Good stuff Liam..

Kenhandshake
angel99999online today!
Very creative thumbs up

bouquet angel
ImagineLove
Liam this is stellar! So many beautiful correlations in words! Excellent write, I loved reading this one! cheers hug purple heart
darkhorse555
ken dear pal thank you for the wonderful comment smilingangel grin
niah9
sometimes even the most romantic words, can not stir loving passion, but you have the gift....heartfelt love, warmth and sincerity.....Kathyteddybear
adjhe
darkhorse as always when you are done with the poem your feelings lay on the page for us to see. You are very talented. Thanks for sharing this with us.teddybear
diana_1
Supremely sweet to rad and very lovely write...wave
darkhorse555
angel thank you for the wonderful comment dear friend angel grin
darkhorse555
imagine thank you deeply for the truly beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear friend angel grin
darkhorse555
so very true kathy but some people do not see what is in front of them wonderful comment thank you kindly deeply appreciated dear friend grin
avias
A look thru eyes that see the"sweet, beautiful mystery....always remaining a dream:"....a story of wishing for more. wine handshake
darkhorse555
addy dear friend thank you for the beautiful comment bless you angel grin
darkhorse555
diana dear friend thank you kindly for the dazzling comment deeply appreciated bless you palangel grin
darkhorse555
avias thank you ever so kindly dear friend for the wonderful comment wishing you a happy and joyous year angel grin
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