Room At The Top

O how I remember that night,
the long winding staircase
stinking of urine,
you saying
don't worry all
will be fine

I lost my red stiletto shoe
in our haste to
get to the
"Room At The Top"

We were young,
we were hungry
to shed all outer trappings,
hungry to be one
skin on skin

Closing our mind to the
threat of nuclear war,
'The bay of pigs'
brought fear to our
teenage hearts

We wanted to live
before we died,
we knew it all
Mam & Dad knew
nowt

O the stench of urine
in that room,
I remember it till this day,
we could hear mice
scuttling,
leaving their
black death droppings

Soon ...

you reached my inner core,
the life giving womb
of future generations

We became one,
in that stinking ...
"Room At The Top"
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Mar 2015

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candykid
Awesome.....thumbs up
Titania48
Thank you CandyKid. wave
lindsyjonesonline today!
Hello lovely lady..Your style, I can't be mistaken, you are the one I have always admired...nice to read you.

Have a grand time lovely lady of mine.bouquet bouquet hug
Titania48
Lindsy, many thanks grin wink
Spartacus2012
Good write Titania!

Kenflower
Yankee4you
Liken the contrast......
darkhorse555
powerful piece of writing very beautifully penned angel grin
Abby1963
Ms T yet another beautiful poem your write again teddybear heart wings
honeybear3000
touching thanks for sharing your feeling;s and thoughts teddybear
Titania48
Many thanks Ken. wave purple heart
Titania48
Cheers yankee.cheers purple heart
Titania48
Many thanks darkhorse for commenting.wave purple heart
Titania48
Thank you Abby for your kind comment.bouquet purple heart
Titania48
My pleasure Honeybear, wave
beautifulyou
hi titania wave
the juxtaposition between life and death,
death and life is deeply powerful here,
both in word and image

thank you for sharing rose
Macduff5
Hi Titania,

I've just been re reading "1984". This reminds me so much of that secret place where Winston and Julia could make love.
Nicely written. wine bouquet
Titania48
Thank you so much beautifulyou bouquet
Titania48
Dear Rob,
sorry I missed your kind comment, I miss you too.hug wine
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