Empty Words

So very sorry for your loss,
At least there was no pain.
These empty words seem meaningless,
When Death has won again.

You have our deepest sympathies,
You're in our thoughts and prayers.
These hollow sounds just echo,
Through the hall and down the stairs.

The numbness is a blessing,
It all seems so unreal.
Til all the words just fall away,
And empty's all you feel.

Late at night, when all is still,
The lonliness sets in.
The thoughts of words you didn't say,
The things that might have been.

Eventu'lly the pain will ebb,
The bitterness, the strife,
To think no more such thoughts of death,
To celebrate the life.

The ones you've loved are never gone,
They still live on in you,
Touching every part of life,
In all you say and do.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Mar 2010
About this poem:
Written on hearing of the death of a new friend's mother. Talking to her made me think of what it was like when my own mom died.

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Comments (8)

paloma66
Death is just closing of another door.A gardn on the other side of the wall where the rose is transplanted to bloom in fairer climes.They continue to live on in our hearts.
Well written poem,thank you for the thoughts.bouquet bouquet bouquet bouquet bouquet bouquet bouquet bouquet bouquet bouquet
agoodguy2have
yes...VERY well written poem, good tight structure, good rhyming, but MOST important, great message! You nailed it.
trurorob
yes sad times do make us think a bit!
rob
jazzy75
freeatlast - ah...great poem and title...really love it!cheers
hedistuff
veryvnice,,,free
freeatlast64847
Thanks every one for your kind words of encouragement! :)
Ladybee42
I don't know what to say, i didn't notice this before. it feels like a very personal poem, thanks for sharing...sad flower
NeverEndingStory
one of the most beautiful departing poems I have ever read. Thank you for sharing teddybear
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