still rain

The rain echoes
back into itself, quiet descent
and slow waning
is the incredible lingering rain.

The sun rises
heavenly over hills-
a sunset at sea conceived early;
already signs of blazing rapture.

The you I see
is beautiful--
in flames of sea and heavens,
with stillness of quiet slow rain.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2010

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agoodguy2have
interesting visions michael
caroljoyce
Wonderful write.
opentuit
Yes, when I'm in love, I see him in every beautiful, wondrous aspect of nature!

gift
trurorob
nicely vivid!
rob
amahlala
Good imagery...of course I am biased! I love the sea!
Ladybee42
i love slow rain, here in ireland we call it soft rain - it falls for hours and gets into everything. it's a lovely description of it, thanks for sharing...applause
jazzy75
ah...the stillness of it all...excellently described and a wonderful poem :)
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