Mane of Moonbeams

Sparkling, long, and flowing soft, and shimmering through a comb,
A little hand ,with love,caressed each strand and knew a home.
Her eyes alight with awe to see the splendour falling there
in the magic that was moonbeams, that was grandma's silver hair.

A web of love she wove in it when plaiting it each day
and trapped the little heart that had no other place to stay.
Grandma lent her patience to the comfort of the child
and just let the little fingers roam about at eventide.

Then when the mane of moonbeams had been prettied for the night,
the child would hold that rope that led her safely to the light
of a heart that filled to bursting, and a safety so rare,
in a world that was upended, save for touching grandma's hair.

The years flew past, as swifts in flight to greet a summer's day.
The little child grew up and left the nest to fly away
to do great deeds of courage, and to plant some seeds of care,
letting other little fingers weave their patterns in her hair,

just like grandma, now long gone , had done so many years ago,
she helped them braid their patterns, and encouraged them to grow
to be full and loving people, and to laugh and share and play.
So the lesson of her grandma's mane of moonbeams lives today.
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Posted: Jul 2010

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paloma66
So,So beautiful & touching, I loved playing with my grandmom's long silver tresses,wrapping them around my finger and falling asleep.What sweet memories.Thank you so much.thumbs up hug bouquet
caroljoyce
Beautiful poem, filled with touching imagery and analogies, well done.bouquet
Ladybee42
that's a lovely image you painted there gingerbe, thanks for sharing this lovely poem. i was allowed brush my dad's hair when i was a child - he went kinda bald later...laugh laugh
it wasn't me i swear! roll eyes
thumbs up thumbs up bouquet bouquet
trurorob
well done GB!, very moving!
rob
bevbelle
Oh Gingerbee--What a Lovely Poem!
So Rich, so Vivid.
You're flooding me with memories--now of my Grandmother--I loved to brush and comb her long 'silver'--with a few strands of 'black' hair- every night.
Seems 'You Irish' are Blessed with 'Deep Expression' of feeling and thought-you take us into 'the moments' as we share your sentiments.
Thank you for Such Wonderful Poetry.
Earlgreytea
Loved it...
pilgrimageoflove
Beautiful.....

my favourite
to do great deeds of courage, and to plant some seeds of care,
pilgrimageoflove
Beautiful.....

my favourite
to do great deeds of courage, and to plant some seeds of care,
SCatlyn
Love the title and the poem
marikia
It is so touching what you write. I too used to be the granny you describe, as caring as yours, I was raising my pretty granddaughter the way yours did and put so much love and hopes into the little one I adored. My heart was broken to no mending when her mother married another man and took her far, far away to Germany, to a man whom I do not know and who's going to enjoy seeing her blossom and grow into beautiful maiden. I fear I will never ever go over this pain, no matter how comfortable and happy her life may prove to be from now on. This is a pain I will have to live with all my life. Thank you very much for this lovingly conceived and well written poem. I will always look forward to your poems.
jazzy75
GingerBe - your poem touched me deeply...and brought a tear to my eye. it is simply beautifulhug Thank you for sharing teddybear
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