A Pillar that stands all alone After others have all come and gone
Continuously supporting, as is it's duty Holding nothing back and giving completely
Out in plain sight, but totally unseen No one hears its silent scream
The ache of loneliness never healed The void of happiness never filled
The quiet urge to be worth more But never having an open door
The constant burden weighing heavily I am that pillar; that pillar is me
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Posted: Aug 2010
About this poem:
This is the first poem that I have posted on this site, and actually I've never showed this poem to anyone before. I definitely do not consider myself a very good poet, and I do not write regularly. Just sometimes when I'm really emotional about something, I start to rhyme a little. As in this case, I was feeling pretty down; alone and just not seen, even though I try to be and do everything right.
Cnote: a worthy first post, is it Doric, Ionic, or Corinthian?...no matter, a Herculean effort to put it before the world...ok, maybe just the poets here at the corner, but all are worthy, all are welcome! ;-)
The ache of lonliness never healed, The void of happiness never filled. Are you kidding this is good stuff,emotional, deep,. Please write more this gets two and an
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKAug 5, 2010
Thankyou for posting this one Cnote.....I enjoyed it.......Welcome to Poets Corner.......Andrew.....xxx
swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USAAug 5, 2010
My sentiments have been well expressed by those who have commented before me! Great piece for a 'first poem'... nice portrayal of lonesomeness by comparrison to a tangable object such as a solitary pillar! Seems the world supports many of them! You get a gold star from me!
RedexNorthumberland, England UKAug 5, 2010
A very good written poem on sadness, and loneliness, and strength all good poems come from strong emotions, and this is good,welcome in this little corner
Ladyjjeast, Norfolk, England UKAug 5, 2010
Welcome Cnote A great first poem..looking forward to more,
Wow! You guys are awesome! Thank you so much :) I have this huge smile on my face right now I appreciate the encouragement, more than I can 'type'. Thank you!
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all good poems come from strong emotions, and this is good,welcome in this little corner
A great first poem..looking forward to more,
Ljj..