Checking out your profile I send you a few lines One of many suitors in search of elusive love so divine You answered my initiative with a sense of energy that this time it was for real A hidden sense inside your psyche assumed this was the emotional high I too would be able to feel.
We exchanged photos and were impressed by the images in front of our view Common interests were several in the thoughts we exchanged as far as we both knew Questions concerning our future were put out for both parties to see Almost ready to announce to the world a new couple in the near future we intended to be.
A blank screen became my companion for several days in a row Expected success in the game of love had apparently lost its everlasting glow Reviewing my past overtures for any mistakes I had made Just another notch on your belt for someone else who failed again to earn a passing grade.
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Posted: Aug 2010
About this poem:
Everyone has positive thoughts on a singles website. Everyone is looking for social companionship. Things are moving along smoothly between you and a perspective new friend. ALL OF A SUDDEN WITH NO ADVANCE WARNING. What happened???
Can relate to this good poem, Nothing ventured etc
DavidscorpioDublin, IrelandSep 4, 2010
This is a very well expressed sentiment about an experience which I have heard is commonplace on this and other such sites. People leading you along and then suddenly "ending it". I can vouch for it myself. Well put together poem
quite sad yet this poem nailed whot some of us had experienced. appreciate ye much Mr.Harlow for sharing yer melancholy but wonderful poems. Blessed be...
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