my dilema

is it time to share my thoughts
or should i keep it inside
sitting in a dark room
and i wonder why

sitting in my room trying to decide
what should i do for my life
why is making these decisions
take so long to decide on what to do with my life

do i have to follow what people want me to be
or do i can i follow my own path
but why is it to hard for others to accept
what i like to choose deep inside

why is it hard to keep my jealousy at bay
to bury it deep and hold on to it tight
to act all happy but its burning inside
should i let it all out in floods
or should i keep it buried inside
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Posted: Aug 2010

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scarwolve
a poem how i feel in side but i have kept the reason in for you all to try piece it together
amahlala
It is always hard to determine if you should follow anothers' course for you or if you should follow your heart and see where it will lead you...only you can make those decisions for yourself...as hard as they are....good poem!bouquet
scarwolve
yes true it is hard but hopefully i will pull through
Ladybee42
if you follow your own path, you are responsible for the success or failure of it. if you do something to please others around you, the failure or success can be attributed to them. it is your life, what ever you do - you can only do your best hug thumbs up good luck
scarwolve
thank you for the response much appreciated
ChosenOne
why is making these decisions?
or do i can i follow my own path?

Come on dude poetic license aside it doesn't make sense as English let alone poetry.confused
scarwolve
"why is making these decisions?
or do i can i follow my own path?"

Come on dude poetic license aside it doesn't make sense as English let alone poetry

i should of used a comma and i can see how its confuseing

why is making these decisions?
or do i, can i follow my own path?
scarwolve
now to further the reply i stringed the words that way to show how at the time i was confused and annoyed
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