is it time to share my thoughts or should i keep it inside sitting in a dark room and i wonder why
sitting in my room trying to decide what should i do for my life why is making these decisions take so long to decide on what to do with my life
do i have to follow what people want me to be or do i can i follow my own path but why is it to hard for others to accept what i like to choose deep inside
why is it hard to keep my jealousy at bay to bury it deep and hold on to it tight to act all happy but its burning inside should i let it all out in floods or should i keep it buried inside
scarwolveOPscarwolfs den, Carlow IrelandAug 13, 2010
a poem how i feel in side but i have kept the reason in for you all to try piece it together
amahlalaAberdeen, South Dakota USAAug 13, 2010
It is always hard to determine if you should follow anothers' course for you or if you should follow your heart and see where it will lead you...only you can make those decisions for yourself...as hard as they are....good poem!
scarwolveOPscarwolfs den, Carlow IrelandAug 16, 2010
yes true it is hard but hopefully i will pull through
if you follow your own path, you are responsible for the success or failure of it. if you do something to please others around you, the failure or success can be attributed to them. it is your life, what ever you do - you can only do your best
scarwolveOPscarwolfs den, Carlow IrelandSep 7, 2010
thank you for the response much appreciated
ChosenOneDublin, IrelandSep 7, 2010
why is making these decisions? or do i can i follow my own path?
Come on dude poetic license aside it doesn't make sense as English let alone poetry.
scarwolveOPscarwolfs den, Carlow IrelandDec 24, 2010
"why is making these decisions? or do i can i follow my own path?"
Come on dude poetic license aside it doesn't make sense as English let alone poetry
i should of used a comma and i can see how its confuseing
why is making these decisions? or do i, can i follow my own path?
scarwolveOPscarwolfs den, Carlow IrelandDec 24, 2010
now to further the reply i stringed the words that way to show how at the time i was confused and annoyed
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or do i can i follow my own path?
Come on dude poetic license aside it doesn't make sense as English let alone poetry.
or do i can i follow my own path?"
Come on dude poetic license aside it doesn't make sense as English let alone poetry
i should of used a comma and i can see how its confuseing
why is making these decisions?
or do i, can i follow my own path?