I hear yuh man, it will never happen, but a man can dream
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKAug 30, 2010
Yep I know from experience it can happen! I once posted a poem about my marriage that finished over twenty years ago now, and the amount of comments offering me advice was unbelievable, a pity that the well meaning people on here didn't read what I had written at the bottom, that it was a long time ago and things had moved on somewhat!....We do have a lot of "psychologists" here....lol.... I wrote something similar saying that what I write is only a poem....no more no less.
jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeAug 30, 2010
sometimes some words are too deep and it twist the brain,,looool,,nice write free..my brain was not twist here,i like it
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusAug 30, 2010
"So please hear what I am saying, Just my words and what they mean, And don't try to insert meaning. My lines have no inbetween."
these words should be required learning by every feminine spirit, and engraved on stone, although, alas, Freeatlast it is only valid for noble souls such as yours, know what i mean?
tinypixiestoke on trent, Staffordshire, England UKAug 30, 2010
Love your poem Free and totally agree very well expressed
This coincides with my 'What a man really wants' (for the ladies) poem...
TP4G
beautifulyouNew York, USAAug 30, 2010
free, do you really mean what you think you're saying?
i've suspended interpretation of meaning beyond your words after consulting the writings of Carl Rogers
Thanks for the comment Jihadmeathello! Yeah, just another dreamer.
Yeah andrew, I've noticed a lot of comments that indicated that the person hadn't tead the comment, or even the poem very well. Oh well, we can only try... Thanks!
ben999dungarvan, Waterford IrelandAug 30, 2010
nice poem freeatlast, the curse of over analyzes, loss of spontaneity, and the attempted shaping, and molding of people, instead of accepting them for who they are, is it any wonder we walk alone, sometimes.
jerseygirl49Petersburg, Virginia USAAug 30, 2010
Hey there free!!! I once read a book called "woman cant hear what men dont say"..LOL..No but really I too have been misconstrued on here, we should not assume too much...nice write..JG...
chained4ever, sooo, how long have you felt maligned by misinformed strangers? Do you feel that your mother has intentionally brought you to these strangers? Would you like to lay down on the couch and free associate? ;-)
Ah goodguy... You can always be counted on to come up with something witty and pertinent. Never met a shrink who wasn't at least a bit on the "far side," so you would probably qualify.
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Just my words and what they mean,
And don't try to insert meaning.
My lines have no inbetween."
these words should be required learning by every feminine spirit, and engraved on stone, although, alas, Freeatlast it is only valid for noble souls such as yours, know what i mean?
This coincides with my
'What a man really wants' (for the ladies) poem...
TP4G
i've suspended interpretation of meaning beyond your words after consulting the writings of Carl Rogers
seriously, great write! love it!
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Yeah andrew, I've noticed a lot of comments that indicated that the person hadn't tead the comment, or even the poem very well. Oh well, we can only try... Thanks!
I once read a book called "woman cant hear what men dont say"..LOL..No but really I too have been misconstrued on here, we should not assume too much...nice write..JG...
Thanks Earl, but I'm sure many men are just as guilty. Not you or I, of course...
Too funny beautiful! Always enjoy your comments, thanks.