The Heart

If u could see my heart you wouldnt reconize it at all
If u could touch my heart u wouldnt feel a thing
If u could taste my heart you couldnt taste the bitter sweet taste
If you could smell my heart you would know what the smell of void smells of
Most of all if you used your heart to see, touch, taste, and smell mine, then u would know that my ...
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Sep 2010
About this poem:
i wrote it after a girl i met and went out with on here broke my heart

Poems entered on these pages are copyrighted by the authors who entered them. They cannot be reproduced without the author's written consent. © Copyright 2001-2024. All rights reserved.

Post Comment

Comments (6)

ForeverDestiny
Nice piece. I believe too many of us, have experienced at one time the heart you describe. Thank you.
jlhflex
thank you. i write better when things that i write of actually have happened to me
gnj4u
Hi, jlhflex,
Amazingly, no matter how many times the heart is broken, it remains beating, waiting for the one who can recognize it and rejoice in its feel, taste and smell.
beautifulyou
jlhflex

gnj4u couldn't have said that better!

ty for sharing your write



bouquet
jlhflex
Thank Yall for the comments
Swan87
Don't let anyone break ur sweet heart !!
Beautiful poem

Swan
Post Comment - Let others know what you think about this Poem
Report Abuse for this page, if inappropiate

More Poems by jlhflex

Stats for this Poem

on Sep 2010
323 Views
Last Viewed: May 5
Last Commented: Sep 2010

Feeling Creative?

We use cookies to ensure that you have the best experience possible on our website. Read Our Privacy Policy Here