I would go back to that sea so blue
and the pier where i could view
the ocean deep and that creeping tide
where at night the stars don't hide
I would go along to the cliff top there
and the wind would play with people's hair
on a summer's day people walk that way
it's the place where old folk stay
I would walk the promenade and there
see the sandy beach like a woman fair
as caressed by waves upon her shore
in that pleasant town again once more
Comments
andrew149 Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UK
Sun Jan 30, 2011 12:57 PM WET
Yep....I live about 100 yds from the beach here, a lovely poem Serpico, well written and descriptive....Thankyou....Andrew serpico12 cardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UK
Sun Jan 30, 2011 1:02 PM WET
hi andrew and thanks for your comments appreciated as always..the place here is eastbourne..favourite spot of mine in the 70s and 80s.. boyshchrm6 barrie, Ontario Canada
Sun Jan 30, 2011 4:39 PM WET
The allure of a beach and sea
is wel described Serpico. serpico12 cardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UK
Sun Jan 30, 2011 4:55 PM WET
thanks boyscharm..appreciate you reading and responding.. Ladybee42 Waterford, Waterford Ireland
Sun Jan 30, 2011 5:21 PM WET
this is lovely serpico, i love the beach too - mostly when the waves are high and crashing full of energy, but i love the gentle times almost as much, serpico12 cardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UK
Sun Jan 30, 2011 6:58 PM WET
hi ladybee..thank you for your thoughts and liking the poem..like you i love the sea..something about it..instant draw...thanks again.. niah9 Far North Hokianga., Northland New Zealand
Sun Jan 30, 2011 7:30 PM WET
Ah...Eastbourne...maybe it felt...my aunt has an hotel there....nice write Serpio...nice to walk down a lane of memory. Niah serpico12 cardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UK
Sun Jan 30, 2011 7:45 PM WET
hi niah and thanks, for your comments .. small world you having family there...great place to be.. Macduff5 Newcastle, New South Wales Australia
Mon Jan 31, 2011 1:42 PM WET
Lovely poem Serpico....the images resonate in my imagination.hi macduff5 hey thanks mate for the viewing..appreciated...glad you liked the poem.