ShakenHeart
ShakenHeart
Oct 2016
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You and I

To waste the day in pure bliss
Silence drops
Exquisiteness
Such an aquamarine in pale blue sky
Memories abound
Smile and sigh
Emphatic tragedy
Inside I cry
Wondering wistfully why
Spring has sprang
Fall has fell
Summer slept
Winter did quell
Outspoken insanity
Lucid imaginings
Limpid pools of exquisite radiance
Dance Macabre along such empty halls
Brokenly waiting for you and I


Just a poem what do you read from it what emotion and thought does it bring you?
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Elegsabiff
Elegsabiff●Motril-ish, Andalusia Spain
Oct 17, 2016●358 Blogs●9,358 Comments
#1
Yours? thumbs up
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ShakenHeart
ShakenHeartOP●Decatur, Indiana USA
Oct 17, 2016●12 Blogs●205 Comments
#2
yes I just wrote it
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GreenHouseAt
GreenHouseAt●Frühlingsfeld-Südenboss, Rhineland-Palatinate Germany
Oct 17, 2016●35 Comments
#3
You are really romantic. I truly wish you that one day your Danse Macabre will be over and that your current Blue will turn into the more beautiful Blue you long for.
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ShakenHeart
ShakenHeartOP●Decatur, Indiana USA
Oct 17, 2016●12 Blogs●205 Comments
#4
Ah but then my art will fall through the cracks Green happiness does not make for good poetry dunno
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Calypso51
Calypso51●Thurgau, Switzerland
Oct 17, 2016●800 Comments
#5
"Outspoken insanity"....very me


Nice one...thumbs up
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ShakenHeart
ShakenHeartOP●Decatur, Indiana USA
Oct 17, 2016●12 Blogs●205 Comments
#6
Thank you Cal grin
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Elegsabiff
Elegsabiff●Motril-ish, Andalusia Spain
Oct 17, 2016●358 Blogs●9,358 Comments
#7
But which would you rather have, happiness or poetry?

I echo Green - beauty in loneliness is a gift, but true contentment is perhaps a greater one
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GreenHouseAt
GreenHouseAt●Frühlingsfeld-Südenboss, Rhineland-Palatinate Germany
Oct 17, 2016●35 Comments
#8
Ah, that's not always true. Some of the best art is indeed born in pain, but happiness does inspire as well and leads to unimagined heights in creativity and art.

Think of the poets who live love. These experiences are fruitful for poetry.

And even when you will have found love you will always have pain as well. So no need to worry that you might be too happy one day. Lol
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ShakenHeart
ShakenHeartOP●Decatur, Indiana USA
Oct 17, 2016●12 Blogs●205 Comments
#9
But what if my contentment is in my loneliness? What if everyone is reading this wrong and it isn't about someone I haven't met but someone I lost in the river of time to death.
That's why I asked what people thought and what emotion they get from it
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diova
diova●My Valley, Gauteng South Africa
Oct 17, 2016●373 Comments
#10
The mention of memories, tragedy, smile, sigh and cry and then empty halls reminded me of death, the loss of a loved one...

Beautiful.
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ShakenHeart
ShakenHeartOP●Decatur, Indiana USA
Oct 17, 2016●12 Blogs●205 Comments
#11
grin Div you weren't supposed to read the comments then comment rolling on the floor laughing the reason I asked for thought of emotion and what people get from it is a poem can be seen almost from an endless point of view
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diova
diova●My Valley, Gauteng South Africa
Oct 17, 2016●373 Comments
#12
Shaken! I didn't! Cross my heart laugh

I was side tracked by a phone call and saw your comment after I posted, I knew you were going to say that laugh
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ShakenHeart
ShakenHeartOP●Decatur, Indiana USA
Oct 17, 2016●12 Blogs●205 Comments
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I'm glad you liked it wine
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