Soon

by ImagineLoveVenus, Montana, USA

Aug 2014 333 Views 10 comments

Soon

I feel low
Not aglow
These feeling
I need to stow
Not show
Emotions
Hurt
Feeling used
Abused
Taken
Advantage of
Why?
Does love
Have to hurt
So much
Cause pain
And such
That part
We always
Start
Vowing
Not to depart
Hurting inside
Miles wide
Why?
How high
Or low
Do we go
Center
Please enter
Be real
Please feel
Loves desires
Deep love
Not wounds
Soon

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Posted: Aug 2014

About this poem:

Feelings today after yesterday. Why? Soon.

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Comments (10)

JEANIEMACLETTERKENNY, Donegal IrelandAug 12, 2014

AW...honey.....don't be blue.
Soon..........

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAAug 12, 2014

Poignant write Jade..Chin up!

Ken

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAAug 12, 2014

Laura loves you jade

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAAug 12, 2014

Hi Jade,

I'm sure you realize me saying "chi up" is not at all dismissive..I'm merely wishing you a brighter day..It's a shame some project their pessimism and depression on this corner..I'm not at all "sick of this corner" or tired of living..

Regards,

Ken

ImagineLoveOPVenus, Montana USAAug 12, 2014

I am not that blue anymore, once I write, as I think we all do, we have a calm or at least a wee bit of understanding..we're all poets and I love you all no matter how you feel, what you write I read to feel you, your moments and always with love in my heart! This site has been a beacon in a tempest for me!

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKAug 12, 2014

People often say the wrong thing trying to help people-not meaning to be unkind.

To a person with severe depression
Being told 'chin up' is as helpful as being ordered to stop bleeding, or stop having cancer, or stop having a heart condition.

online today!

weemick1960Fife, Scotland UKAug 12, 2014

Hi Jade, I'm glad your not feeling bad anymore. I don't know If It's actually Love that hurts. I don't think this makes sense but I think Love Is neither good nor bad, It's neither happy nor sad. You bring In the human factor then love becomes one way or the other. I'm having one of those nights. God, just bring on jaws to take me away. We are all the human creature and the human creature desires Love, needs It. I hope you soon find what you seek.
Have a good night. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

ImagineLoveOPVenus, Montana USAAug 12, 2014

Mike, I think I caught you later! WINK...

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 13, 2014

I can relate to such feelings. We always have a vision of how we hope love would turn out to be but nothing ever turns out that way. I enjoyed the read Imaginelove.

ImagineLoveOPVenus, Montana USAAug 13, 2014

Thank you poet...express, don't repress!

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