breaking down

please..dont act like you care..
dont attempt to be my light
don't try to make all my pain go away..
don't try to tell me everything will be alright..
don't tell me to stay alive a little longer..
don't say what im doing to myself is stupid
don't pretend you've been where i am
you'll never understand..
no one will....
im alone in this world..
nobody to stand beside me..
nobody to share my pain and distress with
no true place to call home
no reason to be here
you didn't think anything would be this imperfect
were lost
we spend all our lives searching for ways to feel
ways to feel alive...
our heart beat isn't enough...
sometimes it requires self inflicted pain....


a poem i wrote that fits me...
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Comments (12)

Sounds a bit like more emo weirdness to me..

Self indulgent bs
Leo,
Perhaps you could be a bit more sensitive to her feelings...she is quite young and everyone is different. She should be able to express what she feels and not be judged for it.

cool
That is an awesome poem.wink
Nice words Jenn amazing how deep we can go when low...
Just remember to come back up lil' girl dont get lost in the abyss, not a nice place to hold court
Van,
Wise words for everyonecool
thanks Lana ... weve all been ther done that huh?
My heart goes out to you. I can only imagine your pain. very expressive poetry...keep writing-writing frees the soul.hug
Pain, lonely, confuse and hopeless... I hope this is only a poem Jenn, not discribe your real life! You're still young and beautiful, don't waste your timnes for anything discourage. Goodluck and God bless you! hug
jen,Do everything u like but atleast stay alive a longer and longer.comfort
@xjennxox: You are still so young hug .. I liked the fact you expressed your feelings and emotions in a poem purple heart , not everyone has such gift thumbs up .. Keep writing and post here thumbs up ..
Breaking down.To tired to go on anymore.People around you just don't understand you not wanting to fight anymore.When all you have done is fought for years with your only reward being more pain and more bad things thrown at you,you just get to tired to fight anymore.


It gets to the point where you have to ask yourself "why"? "What's the point"? The current is pulling you down and all you can do is let it.
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