mikenewtothis

mikenewtothis

Jun 2013

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PLEASE LISTEN TO WHAT I HAVE TO SAY

OH SOLEMN ONE WHY DO YOU CRY
CAN I WIPE THE TEAR FROM YOUR EYE
A LOVE IS GONE YOU SAY
BUT TOMORROW IS ANOTHER DAY
WHY DO YOU TURN THE OTHER WAY
PLEASE LISTEN TO WHAT I HAVE TO SAY

YOU CAN TURN YOUR BACK
HIDE YOUR EYES
OR RUN AWAY
BUT TOMORROW IS ANOTHER DAY
DONT PLEASE DONT TURN AWAY
PLEASE LISTEN TO WHAT I HAVE TO SAY

YOUR HEART IS BROKEN YOU CRY AT NIGHT
YOU LOCK YOURSELF AWAY BY DAY
SSHHH DONT CRY
LISTEN TO WHAT I HAVE TO SAY
OPEN YOUR EYES
AND LOOK THE OTHER WAY

AWAY FROM PAIN AND HURT YOU FEEL
THAT PAIN I KNOW IS VERY REAL
I CRIED TOO JUST THE SAME WAY
LISTEN PLEASE TO WHAT I SAY
DO YOU REMEMBER I HELD YOU TIGHT
AND SAID THAT ALL WOULD BE ALRIGHT

YOU DONT KNOW HOW MUCH I TRIED
TO TELL YOU HOW I FELT INSIDE
THE DAY YOU WALKED AWAY WITH HIM
THAT DAY IT WAS I WHO CRIED
YOU SEE IVE LOVED YOU FOREVER AND A DAY
SHHH PLEASE LISTEN TO WHAT I NOW CAN SAY

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Angelpepper●Glen Ellyn, Illinois USA

Jun 5, 2013●9 Blogs●10,202 Comments

uh! Okay. .

lavina●Paradise, Indonesia

Jun 5, 2013●710 Comments

I'm listening

mikenewtothisOP●Gippsland, Victoria Australia

Jun 5, 2013●46 Blogs●1,088 Comments

ITS A POEM ABOUT SOMEONE WHO HAS LOVED A PERSON FOR A LONG TIME AND CAN ONLY TELL THEM BECAUSE THEY ARE NO LONGER WITH SOMEONE ELSE

Bogart_1960●Ask me !, Provence-Alpes-Cote d'Azur France

Jun 5, 2013●2,177 Comments

Mike

I dont recognize the poem...who is the author?

Hans4711●Blayney, New South Wales Australia

Jun 5, 2013●32 Blogs●2,066 Comments

@ Mike~ - --------

Bogart_1960●Ask me !, Provence-Alpes-Cote d'Azur France

Jun 5, 2013●2,177 Comments

mikenewtothisOP●Gippsland, Victoria Australia

Jun 5, 2013●46 Blogs●1,088 Comments

BOGART ME I WROTE IT TONIGHT SITTING IN MY BACKYARD WHAT DO YA THINK

mikenewtothisOP●Gippsland, Victoria Australia

Jun 5, 2013●46 Blogs●1,088 Comments

HANS GREAT SONG NICE ONE
BOGART BRUCE BRILLIANT

Bogart_1960●Ask me !, Provence-Alpes-Cote d'Azur France

Jun 5, 2013●2,177 Comments

Mike,

brilliant !!

i have been checking on the internet.. even books. !!

mikenewtothisOP●Gippsland, Victoria Australia

Jun 5, 2013●46 Blogs●1,088 Comments

THANK YOU BOGART I HAD COME ACROSS SOME ON AN EARLIER BLOG AND I DECIDED TO WRITE THIS IT WAS AN IDEA I HAD THOUGHT OF MANY TIMES I USED TO LOVE WRITING POETRY YEARS AGO AND I OFTEN CAME UP WITH IDEAS FOR WRITING SONGS BUT I NEVER LEARNED HOW T WRITE MUSIC AS MUCH AS I LOVE IT

mikenewtothisOP●Gippsland, Victoria Australia

Jun 5, 2013●46 Blogs●1,088 Comments

GETTING VERY TIRED NOW SO A BIT OF SLEEP NEEDED SO ILL SAY GOODNIGHT AND WILL CHAT SOON FOLKS

ALL COMMENTS VERY WELCOME

Bogart_1960●Ask me !, Provence-Alpes-Cote d'Azur France

Jun 5, 2013●2,177 Comments

Mike, you should pursuit it (if i may suggest). I liked how your poem connects to emotions. I really liked reading it..

i only play/try guitar, but dont know how to make music...

Abagail●Bendigo, Victoria Australia

Jun 5, 2013●53 Blogs●1,403 Comments

Rather like Bogart, I would have asked who wrote it. To write like this bespeaks of personal experience. Raw emotion , added with talent, can lead to some remarkable results with poetry.

Again... I am upset that the emoticons do not have a gold star.

single_martha●Tangerang, Banten Indonesia

Jun 5, 2013●220 Comments

Hi Mike

I wish this song can be fit with your poem

nonsmoker●Waterford, Ireland

Jun 6, 2013●282 Blogs●8,720 Comments

Mike,
Thats a nice Poem.
It has good structure and great and meaningful content.

I think you have a Talent

Abagail●Bendigo, Victoria Australia

Jun 6, 2013●53 Blogs●1,403 Comments

Yes, Mike. Really... a gold star! I have seen struggling poets destroy the concept of poetry, but you have done something that is very good here.

Kasih●Jakarta, Indonesia

Jun 6, 2013●102 Blogs●1,482 Comments

Seriously that is sooo romantic

I could the moment it actually give me a funny feeling in my tummy as I read this !

beautiful poem. Wish I was in that moment to finally be able to say the words ..

iFreee●Edmonton, Alberta Canada

Jun 6, 2013●5 Blogs●43 Comments

Hi Mike: It speaks to me...

mikenewtothisOP●Gippsland, Victoria Australia

Jun 6, 2013●46 Blogs●1,088 Comments

THANKS TO EVERYONE WHO COMMENTED ON THIS IT WAS THE FIRST TIME I EVER PUT A POEM I WROTE ONLINE

IT WASNT ABOUT ME BUT RATHER INSPIRED BY OTHERS
A BIT LIKE THE NEXT MUSIC PIECE

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