Regrets (20)
Superb BB
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Damn Bajan sometimes you just amaze me with your writing
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Is that really necessary????
If you don't like it...Don't read it!!!!!!!!!
RUDE people get under my skin...I've about had enough of yours!!!!!!!!
If you don't like it...Don't read it!!!!!!!!!
RUDE people get under my skin...I've about had enough of yours!!!!!!!!
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Very nice ! 
dont worry about that rude person they to scared even put a picture up. probaly can't read they were hope-n for pictures
dont worry about that rude person they to scared even put a picture up. probaly can't read they were hope-n for pictures
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If you can't say anything nice keep your mouth shut..
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Thank you all for your comments.
You guys are so cool!
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That is very nice !! Wish I could write like that !!
Lisa
Lisa
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It seems like you've got a huge fan of poetry,Lady B 
Well, at least she read you poem ... it gives a hope for this woman
Well Done Love it
Marina Zvetaeva and Anna Ahmatova did you get a chance to explore those two magnificent Giants of Poetry?
you've got mail
Well, at least she read you poem ... it gives a hope for this woman
Well Done Love it
Marina Zvetaeva and Anna Ahmatova did you get a chance to explore those two magnificent Giants of Poetry?
you've got mail
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Hey Lady K...you have mail back.
I am definitely getting a huge reaction from my new reader
I will check out the ladies now. I have been reading a lot of the poets from the 20's over the last week as well as Gerard Manley Hopkins and John Donne, two of my favorites.
Sweet dreams my friend.
I am definitely getting a huge reaction from my new reader
I will check out the ladies now. I have been reading a lot of the poets from the 20's over the last week as well as Gerard Manley Hopkins and John Donne, two of my favorites.
Sweet dreams my friend.
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And here I thought my camouflage was working...
Excellent, dear D.
Excellent, dear D.
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just keep on writing, it helps meunderstand me.
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Btw bajanblue.. that post wasn't directed at you.. but I see the promlem has been taken care of.. good poem btw..
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hey all my comment was noted to the person who was rude to BLUE now it seems they have been removed and what i said looks kind-a silly just letting everyone know it wasnt marked to anyone here 
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Yeah I knew who it was ment for... all is good my friend..
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YS, good morning. Thank you, it is a little odd (and funny) to read posts when the post that generated the comment is gone.
Guess she used too many emoticons. And she was unnecessarily impolite as she had already told me twice that she didn't like my stuff.
The gift given to me was that I suddenly felt surrounded by friendship so it was a little like having my birthday a week early!
My thanks to everyone who commented. 
Guess she used too many emoticons. And she was unnecessarily impolite as she had already told me twice that she didn't like my stuff.
The gift given to me was that I suddenly felt surrounded by friendship so it was a little like having my birthday a week early!
My thanks to everyone who commented.
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Yeah they do look funny...Oh well...The perp is gone I hope...
Good Morning and keep on keeping with your lovely poems!!!!!!
Good Morning and keep on keeping with your lovely poems!!!!!!
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You are so talented....thanks for sharing with us
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Oh! WOW! This is Powerful ...... and i mean it.
WOW!
WOW!
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I re-read it again this morning and think i gonna copy and paste it and have it on my wall.
With you permision of course, Lady B May I?
With you permision of course, Lady B May I?
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lost between my lashes
at the corner of my eye
I saw you, I knew you
reflected in my mind,
the memory of kisses
pulled at my lips,
my heart beat faster,
pulse at wrist, at throat
jumping, koi rising
to the surface
for the evening feed
I saw you a moment ago
caught in the tangle of my hair
blown across my eyes,
a jealous wind
keeping you soft focus
I saw you, I knew you,
dancing to the rhythms
of our hearts,
tango interrupted
when I lost sight of you
between the hours
that I wasted in the office
building futures that are
emptied now, a mockery
without you, yet I turn
because I saw you,
I saw you a moment ago
just out of reach,
my hand, my fingers
reaching for the touch
I gave away.