A POEM I FOUND WILL TOUCH US ALL ( Archived) (15)

Jul 14, 2008 5:50 AM CST A POEM I FOUND WILL TOUCH US ALL
yoursuperman
yoursupermanyoursupermanLynchburg, Virginia USA34 Threads 3 Polls 838 Posts
Friends Without Faces

We sit and we type and we stare at our screens,
We can't help but wonder what all of this means.
With mouse in hand ...we roam through this maze,
On an infinite search...lost in a daze.

We chat with each other, we type all our woes
At times we'll band together to gang up on our foes.
We wait for somebody, to type out our name
We want recognition, but it is always the same.

Soon friendships are formed - but - why we don't know,
But some of these friendships, will flourish and grow.
We give kisses and hugs, and sometimes we'll flirt,
In IMs we chat deeply, and reveal why we hurt.

Why is it on screen, we are so easily bold,
Telling our secrets, that have never been told.
The answer is simple, it is as clear as a bell,
We all have our problems, and need someone to tell.

We can't tell real people, but tell someone we must
So we turn to our 'puters ...and to those we can trust.
Even though it sounds crazy...the truth still remains,
Most of my "friends" have no faces...and odd little names.

~Rusty Black

hug hug
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Jul 14, 2008 5:52 AM CST A POEM I FOUND WILL TOUCH US ALL
sxc666
sxc666sxc666unknown, Queensland Australia51 Threads 16,853 Posts
applause applause applause It bought a tear to my eye Gary thank you for sharing this bouquet bouquet bouquet
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Jul 14, 2008 5:52 AM CST A POEM I FOUND WILL TOUCH US ALL
ArticBloom
ArticBloomArticBloomDublin, Ireland2 Threads 83 Posts
professor Excellent
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Jul 14, 2008 5:53 AM CST A POEM I FOUND WILL TOUCH US ALL
Dont_Look_Now
Dont_Look_NowDont_Look_NowHuntsville, Alabama USA5 Threads 1,855 Posts
How very true! angel I loved it, thank you hug
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Jul 14, 2008 6:00 AM CST A POEM I FOUND WILL TOUCH US ALL
Karma3
Karma3Karma3Somewhere, Tamil Nadu India84 Threads 588 Posts
Really wonderful and oh so true! Thank you.
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Jul 14, 2008 6:03 AM CST A POEM I FOUND WILL TOUCH US ALL
starliteisbrite
starliteisbritestarliteisbriteThe planet earth....:), Ontario Canada56 Threads 7,327 Posts
Ca bon!!!!.....applause
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Jul 14, 2008 6:25 AM CST A POEM I FOUND WILL TOUCH US ALL
Scottishlass
ScottishlassScottishlassKnoxville, Tennessee USA491 Threads 23 Polls 3,324 Posts
So beautifully, thoughtfully and truthfully expressed. Thank you for sharing.
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Jul 14, 2008 7:48 AM CST A POEM I FOUND WILL TOUCH US ALL
epicure
epicureepicureAlanya/Antalya, Mediterranean Turkey401 Threads 10 Polls 5,224 Posts
thumbs up it certainly touched me, but where did it touch? I'm not suredunno somewhere above my abdomen is tickeling wink
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Jul 14, 2008 7:49 AM CST A POEM I FOUND WILL TOUCH US ALL
epicure
epicureepicureAlanya/Antalya, Mediterranean Turkey401 Threads 10 Polls 5,224 Posts
epicure: it certainly touched me, but where did it touch? I'm not sure somewhere above my abdomen is tickeling
no noooo ur poem worths more it tickeled my brainwave
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Jul 16, 2008 4:09 AM CST A POEM I FOUND WILL TOUCH US ALL
yoursuperman
yoursupermanyoursupermanLynchburg, Virginia USA34 Threads 3 Polls 838 Posts
I did to , dont see many actually hit the heart as this one does .. glad you enjoyed it.
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Jul 16, 2008 4:11 AM CST A POEM I FOUND WILL TOUCH US ALL
Emanuellla
EmanuelllaEmanuelllaeastern europe, Moldova23 Threads 1,505 Posts
yoursuperman: Friends Without Faces

We sit and we type and we stare at our screens,
We can't help but wonder what all of this means.
With mouse in hand ...we roam through this maze,
On an infinite search...lost in a daze.

We chat with each other, we type all our woes
At times we'll band together to gang up on our foes.
We wait for somebody, to type out our name
We want recognition, but it is always the same.

Soon friendships are formed - but - why we don't know,
But some of these friendships, will flourish and grow.
We give kisses and hugs, and sometimes we'll flirt,
In IMs we chat deeply, and reveal why we hurt.

Why is it on screen, we are so easily bold,
Telling our secrets, that have never been told.
The answer is simple, it is as clear as a bell,
We all have our problems, and need someone to tell.

We can't tell real people, but tell someone we must
So we turn to our 'puters ...and to those we can trust.
Even though it sounds crazy...the truth still remains,
Most of my "friends" have no faces...and odd little names.


~Rusty Black



it is so true......
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Jul 16, 2008 4:18 AM CST A POEM I FOUND WILL TOUCH US ALL
gingerb
gingerbgingerbLetterkenny, Donegal Ireland7 Threads 1 Polls 4,139 Posts
Truisms always hit the heart. I liked this.thumbs up wine TY
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Jul 16, 2008 5:32 AM CST A POEM I FOUND WILL TOUCH US ALL
joshtaal
joshtaaljoshtaalPalmerston North, Manawatu-Wanganui New Zealand9 Threads 335 Posts
Awesome poem thumbs up

It shows how much the internet & computers affect our lives, I wrote something a while ago when I thought I was spending too much time on the computer, not to detract from your post, but I thought i'd share it.

Real Virtuality. (Goodbye my friends)

My life has new direction,
A change is in store,
Away from virtuality,
Onto something more.

Rubbing my eyes,
I step away from the screen,
Losing the blanket,
Letting my insecurities be seen.

What do I need,
That I haven’t already got?
When I look at the world,
I see I have a lot.

It's just that reality,
I had fallen out of touch,
Within my prison,
Of wires & buttons & such.

The mask comes off,
At this point in time,
Time to show the world,
That I am doing fine.

I heard a song,
That asked if there was more,
And I realised,
I had that once before.

So I’m returning to that,
The way I ought to be,
Nigel in the flesh,
A less digital me.

This life will be here,
Just not so intense,
More than the net,
The world is immense.

So it's not goodbye,
Just, 'see ya round',
I'm leaving my cloud,
Going back to the ground.


Joshy
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Jul 16, 2008 5:38 AM CST A POEM I FOUND WILL TOUCH US ALL
WingsOfLove
WingsOfLoveWingsOfLoveparadise, North Carolina USA1 Threads 45 Posts
wine hug

Thankyou for that, it really hits home.
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Jul 16, 2008 7:44 AM CST A POEM I FOUND WILL TOUCH US ALL
yoursuperman: Friends Without Faces

We sit and we type and we stare at our screens,
We can't help but wonder what all of this means.
With mouse in hand ...we roam through this maze,
On an infinite search...lost in a daze.

We chat with each other, we type all our woes
At times we'll band together to gang up on our foes.
We wait for somebody, to type out our name
We want recognition, but it is always the same.

Soon friendships are formed - but - why we don't know,
But some of these friendships, will flourish and grow.
We give kisses and hugs, and sometimes we'll flirt,
In IMs we chat deeply, and reveal why we hurt.

Why is it on screen, we are so easily bold,
Telling our secrets, that have never been told.
The answer is simple, it is as clear as a bell,
We all have our problems, and need someone to tell.

We can't tell real people, but tell someone we must
So we turn to our 'puters ...and to those we can trust.
Even though it sounds crazy...the truth still remains,
Most of my "friends" have no faces...and odd little names.

~Rusty Black


Very interesting! I see you or somebody has re-written this poem. Here is the un-edited poem for anybody who cares.

FRIENDS WITHOUT FACES

by ~ Richard Geyer ~

We sit and we type, and we stare at our screens
We all have to wonder, what this possibly means.

With our mouse we roam, through the rooms in a maze
Looking for something or someone, as we sit in a daze.

We chat with each other, we type all our woes
Small groups we do form, and gang up on our foes.

We wait for somebody, to type out our name
We want recognition, but it is always the same.

We give kisses and hugs, and sometimes flirt
In IMs we chat deeply, and reveal why we hurt.

We do form friendships - but - why we don't know
But some of these friendships, will flourish and grow.

Why is it on screen, we can be so bold
Telling our secrets, that have never been told.

Why is it we share, the thoughts in our mind
With those we can't see, as though we were blind.

The answer is simple, it is as clear as a bell.
We all have our problems, and need someone to tell.

We can't tell real people, but tell someone we must
So we turn to the 'puter, and to those we can trust.

Even though it is crazy, the truth still remains
They are Friends Without Faces, and odd little names.
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